"Bring him to his knees."
Wait, what? This was supposed to be my reward ceremony, hell, I had just seconds ago finally received the title they decided to push on me.
"Bring me the ring."
Alice De Vritara, crimson eyes that burned like fire as she looked down at him. He was so dumbfounded that he didn't even try to stop her as she forced his arm up and placed a ring in his hand. A silver band that twined around a large amethyst that held a deeply crimson core, the Eye of Rostam, expensive enough to buy half a city.
"Oh? Is this a proposal? I didn't know you wanted to marry me that much."
Wait, what? You're the one who forced me to hold the ring, hell, you're even the one who forced me to my knees like this. In this situation, shouldn't I be the one saying thigns like that?
"Don't look at me like that, I'm just following your third tenet."
Again, what? You're blaming this on me? What the hell, all I wanted to do was change your pre-determined fate and raise the supposed monster of the story into a good (Villainess) person.
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(I do not own the cover for this story, I will remove if asked. I also give myself permission to release this on other sites.)
Excellent writing. The quality is far better than what I would expect of web novel. The characters seem pretty fleshed out. I just hope that the fully tragic arc of both the fl and ml won't drag on too long cause they're both sweethearts especially the fl. All in all, great writing. Its a story that I truly want to keep reading !
Well i can only say is this novel are amazing and this should be my first time reading a novel about villainess that in my liking need more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
wonderful story, no grammar mistakes(At least not evident or just small), i am very excited every day for new chapters, one of my favorites right now
Brilliant writing! Honestly it is becoming difficult in finding novels without harem-driven plot without any personality in characters or the world but this novel is a breath of fresh air. Also, the fl seems to be developing into a yandere UwU
honestly upset that I caught up. I recommend reading this.
The characters are well fleshed out and aren't flat. They have personalities and back stories that make them compelling and very interesting characters. The story in and of itself is very interesting and I honestly really like the plot, like at first the story seems generic but the author took the story in a different direction than other books that share the same genre and I honestly didn't expect it but I am definitely liking it. And this is something I really like and appreciate in this story ; Alice and Gabriel are honest and straightforward with each other, they trust each other and though there are misunderstandings if you could even call them that, they are resolved quickly and most of them only happen because Gabriel and Alice both don't have much prior experience when it comes to love and caring about others and being cared for.
This is the best novel I have found in WebNovel in a while. Plus, it's free.
a good read, never get bored while reading this, the author really good to write the character emotion
Writing Quality (4): Good not ground breaking. Story Development (3)/Character(3): Generic, nothing interesting, nothing new, just a refinement of the usual 'Raising the villainess.' And they do end up as do gooders(because of course they would—what? did you expect unique characters shaped by their environment? Hah.) Update Stab(5): Update stability does not mean volume of updates guys. World Background (2): You have read one villainess novel? Good then you know how this world works. Overall: Bland and nothing interesting.
Liked this novel quite a bit, the background felt relatively generic for a villainess fantasy style novel, however certain aspects of the story gave it a unique tinge from other relatively mediocre iterations of this genre. The story writing was also relatively good, although not anything extremely remarkable, it was quite good. I did find a few odd plot holes here and there, but since they're not extremely noticeable/intrusive I don't think they affected my reading experience much. Overall quite a good series which deserves more attention than it has right now.
Very good story with a very detailed world. No grammar mistakes. Story progression pace is just right too
One of the best novels I’ve seen on webnovel. Great character development and a world that feels alive.
this is gold where has this been all my life
Reviewers are dishonest here, nothing more than exaggerated idiocy runs here in this novel.
it's a very interesting style story...like the Male lead and the Female lead way of love and how the deal with there enemies and how they only care for themselves only and there friends or (family).only think is I feel very sad the Author abandoned his/her work and haven't since I have give power stone more then half years but he/she upload I guess...so I giving this review in hope if he/she read my review......hope u continue ur work.