It has great potential wish it had more chapters honestly
2 years ago
3
Fezan_Makrani
that's story development and system consept are very well.
2 years ago
2
TonySage
It has great potential, like another reader said. But the author need to improve on their writing skills.
Anyway, looking forward to the next couple of chapters. Only one is not enough to form an opinion, honestly
a year ago
1
Uchessa
The grammer wasn't very good, and the story was very hard to follow.
It has great potential wish it had more chapters honestly
that's story development and system consept are very well.
It has great potential, like another reader said. But the author need to improve on their writing skills. Anyway, looking forward to the next couple of chapters. Only one is not enough to form an opinion, honestly
The grammer wasn't very good, and the story was very hard to follow.