Hello Detective

The story idea is really good. It would have been a great novel but names like testa,shuna sounds cringe and word "san" makes the reading unbearable. It's sad that you ruined your story with these elements and I am ignoring the grammatical errors

I liked the story, despite not being a literary genre that I appreciate very much, the story is well written and I recommend it to everyone who likes to read police and suspense.

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Despite the grammar issues, the story is very intriguing, and it doesn't lack the 'thriller' effect. I very much enjoyed reading it, and hope the author will be kind enough to present us with more chapters! 🤘🏼🤘🏼🤘🏼

I really enjoyed this detective story; the author has done a great job of creating something with potential. It's an interesting story and a great treat for fans of the genre. Keep up the good work and make sure to update it frequently!

I love detective stories. The author has written something with potential. My review is based on the first 4 chapters. We have the intro of a professional detective, then the mc becomes a detective. He gets his first case and begins his investigation. The pacing is decent and there are a lot of details everywhere. The only thing I dislike is like the forced romance at the beginning. Other then that it is pretty good currently!

Interesting story. And lucky because I also like the mystery detective genre. Interesting synopsis. The first chapter is also good. Even though there are flaws, that's understandable with every plot twist in every chapter that makes me curious at any time. Good job, authors 😊👍

Crime novels are generally very interesting. This one does not lack in the least. The grammar needs a bit of work though. Overall, thumbs up to the author.

I absolutely adore this captivating mystery with the perfect amount of drama. The main character is so witty and it really adds to the overall enjoyment of the story. It's a great read and I highly recommend it! He has an amazing approach to mysteries that is truly remarkable. I am in awe of his ability to take on such complex cases and come up with creative solutions. His dedication and enthusiasm for solving puzzles is truly inspiring, and I can't help but be impressed by his skill. It's no wonder he has become so successful in his career!

A mystery and investigation type novel, it will be my first, I hope you can bring some good elements of mystery in the story and please don't make harem in the end 💕💕

It's good, but you cant say the same for the grammar xD. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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knowing the author I know it will be a great book, the concept is great and the writing style is remarkable . can't tell you enough how much i loved this book . the first chapter hooked me , i couldn't just stop reading . woaaaah this was intense