Ultimate NTR System
Author: Daoistpwhvf9
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Jon gains the power of the NTR system. He'll use it to take revenge, gain power and money, and have his revenge on all the people who humiliated him, offended him and powerful families with all the money.
Jon will achieve his dream to be a CEO of a big MNC with multiple wives in this fantasy-urban world.
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Ultimate ntr system? so does he ntr other people? Or is he the one getting ntr’ed?
Well written so far. Chapters could be 2 pages longer and maybe using a cliffhanger or two might be good. Some things exceed common sense character developement but I'll account that to creative freedom of you as an author. Personally I'd have darkened the MC personality a tiny bit(Cruel repeating treatments by the elite i.e.). Developing him into a more dominating confident personality might be a good direction to follow, but I really like it so far. Nothing is too out of order. Copied my comment. Godspeed.
No NTR on mc right? .
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