Sins Paradise: Domination System

Review from your only beloved Ossan. You can expect some cool and smart MC in this one, unlike the seemingly naive but growing character of my other novel (this MC has gone through a lot) I will just open it as a Q&A place. Q: Will the MC have Harem? A: Yes, of course. It's me. Q: Hoy many girls? A: *Wink* A lot. But only some will become MC's main girls. Q: How strong is the MC? A: He's broken Q: Is there any NTR scene? A: No. MC's girls won't be taken by anyone else. But if you are talking about whether MC will steal some girls, then you will need to read it! The most important one. Q: Any lemons? A: Obviously!. Ask your question in the reply! I will answer them as much as I can without giving any spoiler!

Such relaxing story to read and so many positives.. 1. MC with a brain who has already had his growth from the previous game world. 2. MC who shows compassion and care yet is not soft to his enemies. 3. The unique relationships with the girls are different and the Snu Snu scenes even reflect that. 4. MC is OP, so it isn't always lets power up mid fight so I can win. MC is able to plan (I still thing the Crane incident was a wrong decision on MC, but it still worked in the end) and adjust strategy. 5. OMG the use of pronouns is actually done correctly most of the times. (this here warrants a 6th star for review) 6. Foreshadowing is good, and actually has some mystery to it.

Lol I just can’t. I like your Evil Devourer novel a lot, but this one is honestly horrible compared to that one. Almost every heroine wears I3wd clothes, and although that wouldn’t be a horrible thing if it was in private with the MC or something, but they wear them all around, basically exposing every part of their body to every man who sees them, and that’s honestly just not my cup of tea.

Honestly, this novel blew my mind away. The way it's structured, you just gotta keep reading and reading and reading. The ero elements are well blended with the story and everything just flows well. Author did really well with this.

Coming from Ossan, staying for the story. This novel is the best among what he wrote, in my opinion. The MC is strong from the start. He's cunning, smart, and didn't hesitate to get what he want (even at the cost of annoying the original protagonist of the eroge) The world background is great too! Using Sins and Virtue as a way to judge good and evil. The domination system also interesting. It's not really explained yet, so we need to wait! I hope it's explained in the future. Also... because it's ossan. The character and the way he write ero character is just chef kiss! The update is 1 chapter a day it seems. But when I read the synopsis and his reply at latest chapter. he said he will increase it to 2 chapters after it is contracted. What a same, so 4 star for update for now. Good work!

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Definitely not biased just because I am his friend and checked his works before he uploaded it, but this is great. I usually didn't read any eroge novel because sometimes that put me off when the MC didn't do what he did when it was still in the game. But in this case, the MC had clear goals and didn't hold back. He still cares about consent and such (from what I read in the future chapters). So you can look forward to it. There is also no GF that got stealed from him, it's great.

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well ,overall a good novel with good smuts but there is a problem man your discord link is expired so i cant't access the pictures man.

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It has it positives and is enjoyable in some aspects as there are lots of good reviews but I couldn't ignore the somethings like announcement/appointment made by one of the most influential powers Church to recognize a Paladin by going to classroom with bunch of students important figure with authority like Paladin is announced like that. This like those novels where the protagonist identity is revealed or exposed except on this one there isn't a valid reason why such an important matter happens like its insignificant thing to fulfill teenagers wet dream of feeling important.

I am loving this novel. This is a novel overpowered MC done right. Even though he can clear all difficulties with using brute force but he doesn't, he just enjoys his time chasing girlfriends and he is cunning in his plans. I am enjoying this novel. Keep up the good work author.