THE MAFIA'S REVENGE

Yeah.... Yeah.... I myself am giving a review to my novel, well I just wanna say, that I know you guys are too lazy to review my book so that's absolutely okay, I don't mind that🤠, just reading of it would be enough for me, I try my best to engages you guys with it till the very last, but of course you guys have your own choices in reading and not everyone likes this kind of genre but still, you can give it a try, hehe...

The premise of this story is good, even if it is only one chapter, it gives the feeling of wanting to know more. Mafia brothers and love between enemies... I can't wait to read more chapters. [img=update]

SEEING THE NOVEL AT FIRST I WAS DISCOURAGEDD AT READING IT BUT READING THE GAVE ME UNSATISFIED CURIOSITY OF WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. GREAT NOVEL, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

The plot is good and I love a good mafia, romance story cause love that spouts from danger is thrilling (only in novels, though. Not real life). Overall, the only issue I have is the writing quality. If you work on your grammar and punctuation, the novel will be even more awesome. Keep up the good work!

To be honest, had some reserves after reading the description, but the novel was much better than expected. brothers want to protect their sister, while she wants to do her casual things. Looking forward to more. Good luck author!

Bro, this book is really something. I've thought of read only one chapter of this book but it was so engaging that I didn't realized and red all the chapters you posted, 🤷‍♂️ i've red another book of yours and it was so good that I wanted to read something written by you again, you did a great job in this book like you did in others,I'm really impressed. Keep working I'm reading all your chapters though I'm really lazy to comments on chapter or paragraph,you know🥴

I really appreciate the author for her fantastic and captivating writing that engaged people like me till the very end, of course I gonna gave it five stars as it really deserves it, keep writing author for the people like me to read😊❤

A good start Fairly short, but what's there already shows promise for where the story can go. I'll be watching this one very carefully just to see if it continues to be good

Hi! Just with the prologue I am sure that I want to keep reading more about this interesting story. I will try yo recommend it. Keep writing, please

At the time of this review there is only one chapter out but I am already loving this novel! This has a lot of potential. Keep up the great work!

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

Surprisingly this is the first mafia novel I've ever read! And boy am I glad it was this one. The author is a very proficient writer. There's not a lot of chapters yet so it's hard to gauge 100%, but for right now it has a really good start. The drama is building and I love it.

Very interesting read, it's nice to see how the story progresses and i'm interested in reading more! Dialogue is fun and the whole story is captivating

Dialogues with the characters are great it will better if more characters are added to the work and and with more chapters it will be an interesting read