Marvel: The Journey

So far, so good. The writing quality is perfect, so much so that I haven't found a single mistake. Thank God, cause the majority of the authors on this app have abysmal writing. The character design is good as well. The only reason I only say is because I still don't know much about him, but that's understandable, considering that it's only the 4th chapter. That also goes for tue world background. But I don't think that one is as important as the others, as we all know about Marvel if we're reading this

Allow me to be concise. Kindly provide your reviews, regardless of whether they are favorable or unfavorable, but please do so with sufficient context. It is inadequate to merely state, "I despise this book; the author is foolish and so is MC," and assign a one-star review. Instead, kindly explain the rationale behind your opinion. Similarly, for a five-star review, simply stating "I adore this book; it is outstanding" is insufficient. Instead, kindly elaborate on the reasons that led to such a positive assessment.

Okay I've read up to chapter 117 (skipping 'Last day of agent 13' XD) and this is have been a hit or miss for some people, but honestly this is a hit and miss for me XDWriting Quality: Is good, not much need to be said. the dialogue is good with no brain damaging text and the fight writing is also good.Story Development: now this a mix bag, cause some people dislike how the MC didn't want any cheat, but honestly it's fine as long it's handled carefully (which it did) the MC is scientist meaning he want to get the thrill of his research and founding. Also the multiple POV is bit overdone ngl, I mean I get it, the MC should be the center of the story but he is also supposed to be a scientist meaning he spent his time mostly on his research and the world is still goes on even without him.Character Design: Honestly the characters is handled very good, the relationship between the characters is also good (except for that one chapter when he forcefully give Peggy the serum) catching the character from the show very good.World Background: nothing much to say here but handled well, the plot is subtle and some are basically copy n paste from the show which is fine

Evaluation: Subpar (Could've Gem potential). WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. (We already knew what WW2 history is). 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster plus author-san focuses too much on word count wherein he added too much world & US literature which most of us are already aware of (Real life & FF style). 3/5 CD: MC is an OC-transmigrator which doesn't lack MervelVerse knowledge (No golden finger). MC persona is Chaotic-neutral which is apt for MarvelVerse. Lacks utilization of MarvelVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: kinda boring as it is just a repeat of history which we are already aware of. Lacks creativeness and too indecisive to create new plot. 3/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My Opinion: Lessen your history teacher style as it is kinda annoying plus your forced insertion of plot doesn't do any justice. keep it short and simple and be descicive enough to create new plot. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

the score is above average because I am being objective and the writing quality and world building and the updates are very good. The issue is in my opinion the multiple lead tag and most of all the author trying to pass it in his warning chapter as something marginal and that does not mean there are multiple mc in the story but it is fale. The so called mini-arcs for the other characters last 12 chapters of the 40 something chapters published till the moment of my review, in my book this is not a mini arc or at least something relatively small compared to the chapters dedicated to the Mc. Things will only become worse with extra characters and the author aim of 1000 and more chapters may end up with no more than 300 chapter from the pov of the Mc...If people want read so much about canon characters who are not Si or the supposed mc of the story they would simply read the marvel comics in my opinion. Adding an Oc supposed Mc and then giving him almost as much screen time as the canon characters/secondary characters of the fanfic, it is irksome like a fanfic with an oc mc who follow the canon mc and the likes. Still if you are not bothered by this it is a good read and probably even harem haters would like the romance since is not a pokemon one. Moreover the author is aiming for a realistic harem and since he is an arabic there is none better than them to write something like that since for them harem are legal and accepted even today, for sure they know more about the matter than any harem writing author or any hater who rant about how harem doesn t exist in real life so theybshould notnbe present in a fictional work xd

Great fanfiction, hope you add wanda to the harem .

MC seems more like a side character at times. This feels more like a Peggy carter fanfic

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As much i like the fanfic theres just one thing i hate in this .w. (and maybe anyone else who read this fanfic) and it was the fact that it has other pov to and will not focus on the mc.. while that kinda you know MEH but i know what im reading for becauseni remember one chapter when he/she author says that the pov will not only focus on the mc.. so uhh.. maybe this fanfic is not for everyone because maybe they will just complain that the half of the story doesnt revolve on the mc..

The story is good and so is the character design. Though I think it would have been better if you directly transported mc to marvel without his meeting with God and him rejecting his gift as I think that makes the character unreal. Human by nature are greedy and there is no way someone would reject a leg up in a universe like Marvel that's what makes him unreal

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I like this book very much it's just that the author focuses more on the different people than the MC. So it feels kinda off. It feels like the MC is a side character while the side characters are the MC.

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