Gravity overlord

Author review: I believe that I have a somewhat decent grasp of the external factors of the word such as the world building, history and politics. I do have difficulty with the internal factors such as making new characters compelling and expanding them, dialogue is a major issue for me and I feel as though I am not doing a good enough job on portraying. At this moment I don’t think there will be a lot of action. Yes, this will have battles and duels and such but I think that the most compelling part of the story is rather that mechanism of the world, life, the soul power and beasts. I am writing to make my self better and to improve my writing. Hopefully, I will be able to get better as I write more and more chapters and it will be evident when comparing later chapters with older chapters . I will also try to improve my uploading schedule. I try to upload one per day but that is really hard for me personally for a variety of reasons and I think that my story has a lot of information that will need to be written for later things to make sense. If I cannot wirte once per day i will try once every 2 days. Please be patient with me and thanks for reading my novel

A very interesting setting, coupled with an overpowered child of a character is very fun to read. The author writes very decently, and definitely understands the will of his characters.

Truthfully, I really love how you explained the setting of your story from the get go. Novels with this kind of world building is interesting and fun to read, and I'm honestly shocked how underrated this is. I guess my advice is to add a touch of comedy or mystery. But still, even without it, this book can still stand on its own. Great work! Can't wait to read more ^_^

Very cool. please dont drop this, very unique and ill read to the end. ................................................................................