I must become a wingman for hero
HERO REIGNS a game famous worldwide for it's graphics and fights and it's world creation was the favorite game of Ray our protagonist like many other people Ray was dude with questionable and mysterious past at one fateful night Ray died due to his own foolishness only to be reincarnate in the game as one of the most pathetic named characters Ray lionheart unfortunately they both having the same name he was destined to be shunned and scorned upon by everyone only in the end to be killed by the protagonist this time when ray takes control this will not repeated the ray who was destined to be killed by the hero will become a villain that even the hero fears
AUTHOR
hello guys I am a newbie writer so please DM me on discord about my mistakes my name is ZENO
Alright, so there are many mistakes in this novel, first off, the writer should probably edit the whole story first. Grammar is key. Now, you should change the format. And lastly improve the flow of your story while focusing on the goals. However with all that being said, you have a bright future ahead of you if you can fix all of that.
Daim the writing style is horrible like bro you read novels on here can’t your like take inspiration from them cause it’s very hard to read yours. No beginning or an end in the conversation. One second they talking about subject a a second later they talking about Z