Undead God: I Can Extract Everything

he keeps repeating the Mc's name over and over. Dean Mckenzie does this Dean Mckenzie does that. It's annoying and repetitive.

Raw: 提取成亡灵法神 ............................................................................................................................

There’s a hint of an interesting story here but it’s held back by the writing, the translation, the world-building, the system, and the characters. Other than those things, it’s okay!

This book just randomly stopped updating 2 days ago, plots decent. Translation is kinda Jankie but ive been enjoying it. Probably wont continue reading if it just doesn’t regularly receive chapters.

The story and translations are pretty decent until the mid 40 chapters. The author uses 4 different names for the female goblin following the Mc. He also consistently uses the Mcs last name. we have no need for a sir name for novels. It's repetitive and not needed. The story line is pretty decent, but lacks world back ground into the 40s of chapters. This book has hope if the translation errors are fixed.

book is good but the translation TEAM is just greed maxing after around chapter 100 they split chapters into three and if you only read the two chapters a day from the ad usage thats only 2 thirds of a chapter not even a full one which is crazy to put that into perspective

slow plot development, lots of unnecessary explanation on MCs action which could have been brief a.k.a. info dump,

Raws please 🙏 ……………………………………………………………………..

the story is ok,it's mostly the names of mc and his companions that are strange and kind of break the flow,like doggy 1 and 2 for humanoid skeletons, even if yhey weren't it 's just strange, just call them skeleton.