Undead God: I Can Extract Everything

he keeps repeating the Mc's name over and over. Dean Mckenzie does this Dean Mckenzie does that. It's annoying and repetitive.

This book just randomly stopped updating 2 days ago, plots decent. Translation is kinda Jankie but ive been enjoying it. Probably wont continue reading if it just doesn’t regularly receive chapters.

There’s a hint of an interesting story here but it’s held back by the writing, the translation, the world-building, the system, and the characters. Other than those things, it’s okay!

The story and translations are pretty decent until the mid 40 chapters. The author uses 4 different names for the female goblin following the Mc. He also consistently uses the Mcs last name. we have no need for a sir name for novels. It's repetitive and not needed. The story line is pretty decent, but lacks world back ground into the 40s of chapters. This book has hope if the translation errors are fixed.

book is good but the translation TEAM is just greed maxing after around chapter 100 they split chapters into three and if you only read the two chapters a day from the ad usage thats only 2 thirds of a chapter not even a full one which is crazy to put that into perspective

the story is ok,it's mostly the names of mc and his companions that are strange and kind of break the flow,like doggy 1 and 2 for humanoid skeletons, even if yhey weren't it 's just strange, just call them skeleton.

slow plot development, lots of unnecessary explanation on MCs action which could have been brief a.k.a. info dump,

honestly just trash and not worth your time. the author can't stop repeating the MC's name like if they go more than 5 sentences without saying it we'd forget it, the stupid and constant arbitrary loss of resources (he had to pay 5 silver for something and the literal next chapter it gets two-tapped, he gained command of a mass of skeletons and intantly sacked them only to be told he now needed to use them to conquer the area after sacking them, he upgrades a skill only to be told he only has 5 minutes to upgrade it before he can't upgrade it again until he levels it naturally twice while he is mid battle while still costing him money and it cost him extra money because it needed to be repaired). additionally the translation has random sentences every other paragraph that look like a toddler wrote them.

Quite the fun though repetetive but just like many of my reviews it’s a nice short pallete cleanser

Too much focus on stat levels. Characters not developed enough especially the female leads.

The novel has a nice pace and character development, the only issue with the novel is the ending, it was so fast paced that you’d be confused by that’s happening a little bit

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ending got rushed names are always changeing , author decided to rush the ending to continue his other work the translatord ed ot every chapter into 2-4 parts to get more money

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