Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World

story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.

I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.

I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!

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This story’s got potential, like a tortoise taking its sweet time, which I love lol😂 But there’s too much filler, like stuffing a sandwich with air.😭🙏 Still, the plot’s got me hooked, so keep it up! Just trim the filler, and we are good to go! Author be like:

story's not bad but author is definitely pushing a ton of filler and repeating things to up chapter prices slimy behavior at its finest. also the character was supposed reincarnated after making to his 20s but acts extremely immature and lacks forsight 🙄

Is this harem or no harem?? Hope it's single FL

Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.

The story is interesting so far but there is too much filler in the chapters. Also the chapters are short, so sometimes feels somewhat anoying having to read 7 chapters just for something that in 3 chapters could be done and it would be as good as doing in 7 chapters. Webnovel is not cheap for reading. Quality does not consist of oversaturating with details that do not interest. But as i say the story is interesting so good job and keep going, this just how it feels for me

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story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see

interesting theme lots of potential however repeating of the same information makes it difficult to enjoy the book. Can take 2 - 5 chapters to see progress in the storyline.

Almost 200 chapters in and less then 10 days have passed. Where do you wanna take this story at this pace? Maybe instead of adding all the action in a single day, spread it out a bit? This has so much potential but you're slowly killing it with unnecessary padding.