Ok so I decided to completely restart this novel to put it simply I felt that the main character was a bit bland and the story was just kinda cliche and rushed especially in the last few chapters so probably in a few weeks I will release the new novel that’s all thnaks for reading
a year ago
1
RayanArcadia
The story seems decent in the first few chapters. One thing I appreciate is how the water element is being used. That's not something we get to see often - heck we barely ever see Water get used. The one downside is that Author's grammar skills aren't up to the mark but they can definitely be improved. Overall, I'd say this has got a ton of potential.
2 years ago
3
_J_
MOOOOARRR PLZZZ NEEED REGULAR UPDATES AND PLZ DON'T DROP
2 years ago
2
_J_
BRO YOU ALIVE? ?? ? PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU DROPPED IT
Ok so I decided to completely restart this novel to put it simply I felt that the main character was a bit bland and the story was just kinda cliche and rushed especially in the last few chapters so probably in a few weeks I will release the new novel that’s all thnaks for reading
The story seems decent in the first few chapters. One thing I appreciate is how the water element is being used. That's not something we get to see often - heck we barely ever see Water get used. The one downside is that Author's grammar skills aren't up to the mark but they can definitely be improved. Overall, I'd say this has got a ton of potential.
MOOOOARRR PLZZZ NEEED REGULAR UPDATES AND PLZ DON'T DROP
BRO YOU ALIVE? ?? ? PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU DROPPED IT