Usual 5 Star update from the one who post the story, be sure to leave a like and a good review.
This story is just for fun so mind readers to leave good comment to motivate me.
2 years ago
3
SassyIsland
Tbh honest it isn't that bad... it's just that I find it kind of boring. The MC and his system is supposed to be what makes up the main personality of this story but I'm just not picking up on that, normally I wouldn't find this that bad it's just that it feels more like some sh***ty harem novel with a hefty helping of OP MC. Over all it's just not my cup of tea
Writing quality: 3 stars (boring but the grammar is ok and it's not awful to an unbearable extent)
Stability of updates: 4 stars (I'm saying this assuming that the next couple of chapters are in progress)
Story development: 2 stars (I'm on ch17)
Character design: 1 star (not much to say, it's a self insert)
World background: 3 stars (average; it doesn't explain much about the new elements added to the story and from what I've noticed it peggie backs on the source material to keep you entertained)
Usual 5 Star update from the one who post the story, be sure to leave a like and a good review. This story is just for fun so mind readers to leave good comment to motivate me.
Tbh honest it isn't that bad... it's just that I find it kind of boring. The MC and his system is supposed to be what makes up the main personality of this story but I'm just not picking up on that, normally I wouldn't find this that bad it's just that it feels more like some sh***ty harem novel with a hefty helping of OP MC. Over all it's just not my cup of tea Writing quality: 3 stars (boring but the grammar is ok and it's not awful to an unbearable extent) Stability of updates: 4 stars (I'm saying this assuming that the next couple of chapters are in progress) Story development: 2 stars (I'm on ch17) Character design: 1 star (not much to say, it's a self insert) World background: 3 stars (average; it doesn't explain much about the new elements added to the story and from what I've noticed it peggie backs on the source material to keep you entertained)