Destiny's Alter
Author: B8te
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Sam, a 29-year-old cashier, lived a life plagued by profound sadness and regret. However, if bestowed with a second opportunity, would he be capable of attaining what he ardently desired, or would he succumb to becoming a malevolent force, further amplifying his disillusionment?.
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This is my first story, so if you have any comments about my writing, please tell me so I can improve my faults. Please do it, it looks lot of time and effort too editing all these chapters.
Okay so far Ibread the first chapter...considring it your first novel..it was pretty good..I will suggest you to write your fullest for now and come after three months to edit it... In this time you will realise how much you have improved ...I always do that. But I like the what I read ..your story hold potential ... Keep it up dear
pretty superb storyline, writing ain't really that bad...it's okay 👌
a big shout out to you author it's a nice book and can't wait to read more of it❤️❤️
I have read the first few chapters and overall, I think that the premise was quite interesting. I have read a few stories with almost similar concepts, and the part that I like the most is the fact that the MC of this story isn't just a mere observer although he knows that he has reincarnated into a novel he read. He is trying to become someone who truly live in that world. I hope that you can complete this story smoothly. P.S. Please pay attention to the typos :)
So for I can say it's good. The character building is nice, author did a good job for making it sound better, also there is only 18 chapters.
After reading the first few chapters, I can safely say that the author has given us a good story to read. The world-building is nice, and mostly we see the MC's transition from a side character to someone who wants to be a significant character in the new world. Readers should give this story a try definitely. Keep up the good work author 🙌
You are pretty good for a first time author. Keep it up.
I think that this book holds a lot of potential. The fact that you edit afterwards shows how much work you are willing to put in for this story. You are a hard worker, and it shows through your writing. Keep it up!
Well, I have read a few chapters and I have to say that the story I good. I didn't expect Sam to be reborn as a baby tho, I thought he would be transported into the book and start leaving out his life immediately. Bit this is also good. And I love the relationship between Ron and Bob. Keep up the good work Author ❤️
"Destiny's Alter" is an exciting and engaging book that takes readers on a thrilling journey through a virtual world. The writing style is captivating and descriptive, making it easy for readers to visualize the scenes as they unfold. The characters are well-developed and relatable, each with their own unique strengths and weaknesses. [img=recommend] Overall, "Destiny's Alter" is a must-read for anyone looking for a thrilling adventure with a touch of sci-fi and fantasy.