The Prison Called Life 我
In a serene world on the cusp of a magical revolution, an undercurrent prevails.
As the Vampires, once a powerful race and now weakened by a curse, are being hunted down by humans, who are stronger than them.
Lucas, a boy with a deep disdain for life mysteriously transmigrates into the body of a vampire named Kleir La Brume.
In order to break free from this cycle of life, he must fulfil Kleir's dying wish- of vengeance against humans and freedom for vampires.
But the twist of fate entangles him in the greatest lie of existence.
Follow Kleir as he assumes the role of a strategic mastermind, manipulating the chessboard of life, inching closer to the ultimate prize—freedom, akin to a king.
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cover inspired by 'The case study of Vanitas.'
Fantastic! This novel is really well written, it has a somewhat complicated vocabulary but we can still understand everything. The author uses a lot of "honeyed" words, but it doesn't just feel like a flex, no, it really blends well with the setting of the world. There are a few errors here and there but it isn't something that would make me drop it, it is clearly above the average Webnovel. The sentences also flow well as if it were some sort of fairy tale. It has dark themes that compliment well with the setting, while some don't like that, I found it really great. The World is getting more and more developped, to such a point in which we can easily imagine it. The Development is quite slow, but also not too the point where we are shown absolutly everything about the mc's daily life, which is good. The characters are well-designed with their appaerance also refelcting their personallity giving us a somewhat free reign of imagination. Daily updates for now, so yeah, awesome! Now one of the problem i had with this story was that in the world building chapters it was going here and there without much order, that it bored me a little. I also felt it that it was sometime a bit too monotone, I couldn't feel much exsitment in reading the later chapters. But I haven't read every chapters out yet so I don't know if it gets better. While your choice of words is really good, sometime the sentences feel a bit weird too read, and could be a bit better, but for the most part they flow well. Try to bring a bit more of tension, or such emotions in your novel and I am sure it'll get popular. And for World building don't dumb that much at the same moment, slowly extend it. Make it so that we are informed about it when it is mentioned not just at the beginning. Too much world building bores people, so put it in between thing. Overall, a really good novel!
This writer has a great set-up! His word-useage and flow is really nice, and his characters are very believable so far! I really enjoy some of the powerful 'punch' lines he uses to make a point, and to boot, they are smooth and fluid lines that make you go, 'Oooh'. I got shivers reading the last lines of the second chapter. His use of emotional words to convey the feeling of the setting is really nice! It's just starting out, so come and get on the train while it's hot and about to leave the station! I can feel good things coming from this work.
3.8, this may be a too early review i guess, but that's all the chap we have, let's dive in! Writing, so-so, felt like 80-90% of the sentence has smooth reading flow, so nothing much can be complained. It's a job done well. It was just quite unfortunate that 1-3 chaps lacked significant progression, as it was used to establish the robust background the mc has. Pace started to kick in on chap 4. Update, ah yes, the biggest bottleneck here, author has yet to achiece 7chap/week, but it's already inching closer tho. Characters so far somewhat believeable, complain? Nothing can be complained. MC transmigrate and undergo personality changes. The execution was well done. Overall, decent! the thing that needs to be dressed is the update stability. Keep it up and write!