Forbidden Union: The Evil Prince's Temptation

hello, with twenty two chapters written (pretty early), it's a given that the writing quality will continue to develop throughout. the story is set in a world where the Darkling heritage rules Kingdom Lumina. (Darkling = shadow controllers) In Grisha world, there's only one, but in this fiction... the royal line is blessed with the power. Feel free to ask any question. and tysm for reading <3

Allow me to delicately suggest that you consider reading. Unless, of course, you'd like me to grace your doorstep, donned in my formidable attire, strolling with a hint of menace towards your abode. The repercussions of such a visit might leave you baffled, and rest assured, that's an assurance 🙂

LOVEEE IT! I adore the way you write, it’s just so smooth to write. The way you write flows as smoothly as butter, and I love how you displayed the interactions between characters as well. I’m rooting for the development of the fl and the ml, they have such cute interactions it makes me swoon and giggle sometimes- but anyways, KEEP IT UP!

I have been waiting for another series come out of this author and here we are. It is finally here. Don't know everyone might say, but I will have a bias opinion cuz it is good. Still, anyone reading this should give it a try before coming to a decision. Good luck, happy reading.

The flow of writing is good after chapter 2, like its better than first two. The world building was a little bit confusing but i must say that Jane is a character that people can relate to at one point. Good work!

Perfect, just perfect. everything is perfect in this story, the english, the plots and the storyline. The storyline is very smooth and will keep you engrossed forever. Need more chapters.

So i Just read all the 12 chapters published and here my take for this book. except world building i gave 4 Stars to every aspect so i will let the author know why i deducted the points at first writing quality great exciptionaly well done, but the one point deduction is about some less catchy or attention grabbing sentence and it's consistent in every chapter there are some para which does not click story development and character design yup 4 in both again the reason for minus marking is not an issue but it's more like a wait for future chapter. update stability it's great as because it's just the start but i will like if atleast 2 to 3 chapters are their every day. because this book shows potential and last World building which deserve all the stars

I can only say, if you read, you will not be disappointed. So, go ahead and read! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The novel is written pretty well, and there is not much error which I can nitpick on. All I could say is just keep on updating consistently! (P.S: Make the chapters longer)