I'm a Priest but in remnant? (RWBY)

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So far, I find this story to be good, I hope the author keeps it coming.

Writing and grammar needs work. I see minor errors in almost every sentence, especially when there’s not even a period when someone’s done talking. People interactions are bare bones, fast paced. Not enough character development for me to care about your plain version of RWBY characters. It’s just immediate yang likes mc as soon as they meet, and then BAM-instant couple, same goes for the others. I’m not a fan of the crack type of fics like this one, you should always say what type of fic you’re writing in the synopsis so people aren’t wasting their time. Even for the RWBY verse, you insert these over the top jokes and situations that don’t really serve to push the story forward in any way. Not the worst I’ve read, but also just an average or mediocre story. The weird system template thing is kinda random and doesn’t really make sense, but again this is a crack fic so it’s hot be expected.

10 out of 10 good job Keep up the good work