if u gonna make op MC just do it and don't go round and forget your main story or make dumb self MC
2 years ago
2
SiNgLeSiNcEbIrTh33
I really liked it so far, even though the grammar is messy but still bearable waiting for the next chapter
2 years ago
2
Abhishek_Singh_9897
It's fine if the mc is op but he is too stupid I mean who the hell goes around openly telling others about their ultimate skills their number, what they do and all that. I mean ultimate skills are one of the most secret trump cards for strong beings in tensura and he goes around telling other that he has an intelligent speaking skill, infinite magicule breeder, can destroy everything thing and create anything he desire
like he has been acting to dumb on one side he say that he doesn't want to become to strong from the start but openly using his skills without trying to hide them like he wants the world to know that how op he is
and also making all his subordinates too strong by just naming them making everyone at least at the level of s class monsters
Also their are some grammatical mistakes
fast paced story development
world background is good and a really good long story can be written and continuously
over story is good but needs some character development.
if u gonna make op MC just do it and don't go round and forget your main story or make dumb self MC
I really liked it so far, even though the grammar is messy but still bearable waiting for the next chapter
It's fine if the mc is op but he is too stupid I mean who the hell goes around openly telling others about their ultimate skills their number, what they do and all that. I mean ultimate skills are one of the most secret trump cards for strong beings in tensura and he goes around telling other that he has an intelligent speaking skill, infinite magicule breeder, can destroy everything thing and create anything he desire like he has been acting to dumb on one side he say that he doesn't want to become to strong from the start but openly using his skills without trying to hide them like he wants the world to know that how op he is and also making all his subordinates too strong by just naming them making everyone at least at the level of s class monsters Also their are some grammatical mistakes fast paced story development world background is good and a really good long story can be written and continuously over story is good but needs some character development.
i really liked it so far please continue.