On the Paths of a New World

It's looking very promising so far! The writing style bears some resemblance to the author of Konosuba. There's comedy, and it's being subtly inserted in a very positive way! I hope the author continues to release the next chapters on time and with the same quality. If it continues like this, it will definitely be a five-star read![img=recommend]

The prologue is incredibly captivating. I thoroughly enjoyed the dynamic in Chapter 1, particularly the playful dialogue between the protagonist and the author. I look forward to the next chapters being even better!!

Tô gostando! história fluida e bem escrita, legal ver um brasileiro se aventurando em escrever em inglês

Your writing is excellent, I've never read something so dynamic and enjoyable. Your story has a lot of potential to grow, I hope you achieve that soon. My only complaint is that you don't release a chapter per day, lol, I definitely wouldn't get tired of it.

LOVE IT! I love how you set the tone, and how the pacing was done. The story was neither too quick or too slow, and the characters were written quite fluidly. Keep it up!

On a scale of 0 to 10, I'd give the text a strong 9. The narrative is engaging, the dialogue is dynamic and the characters are interesting. It provides a good blend of fantasy, mystery, and humor. The world-building is solid and the writing maintains the readers' interest throughout. Great job!

It is possible to single out the first chapter, which introduces a well-constructed dialogue, descriptions and thoughts of the main character to the work. But then there is a feeling that the hero has forgotten all the information about the world he got into, but at some moments he remembers. There are funny situations, but for 3 big chapters it is not known what the main character looks like and much more. I am not familiar with the original from where the author draws inspiration, but I recommend first of all to avoid the intersection of the plot of ranobe with this novel. It was possible to make a relocation from childhood through the passage of time, thereby avoiding the possibility of crossing with the original, and it would be interesting.

This one is fantastic bro, it's well-written and really cool. The story isn't stuck in the monotony of following the original main characters of the anime, there's an entirely original plot unfolding. So far, the releases have been right on schedule and they are very well written, a pretty good one

"This fanfic is so awesome! It blends light comedy, mystery, and drama perfectly; I'm enjoying it a lot so far. Keep releasing chapters and sticking to the schedule, and it will only get better. P.S.: You're doing a great job for your first book :)"

Its pretty rare for konsuba fics nowadyays, hope u see it through the end