TheNobleRain

[This is my first novel, it's rough and not set right. The premise is good though, so I'll still come to perfect this story. Please check out my new novel in the meantime while it's all free.]

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In the unimagined future of mankind and the alien race, one particular outcast lives to cause chaos in the two worlds. Then one day, he receives an invite to a school for unique superhumans like himself.

But little did he expect that the peculiar dangers of that 'measly' school would deepen his perspective on why it was good to be alive!

This is the story of a virtually-immortal man and his journey as he embarks into a realm of devastating anomalies, other unkillable immortals, and a world where the thin line between life and death quickly becomes clearer.

... This is the journey of Earth's special monster, a Crimsoux.

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Most of the early chapters are 2000+ words per chapter, cuz the pacing is kind of slow.

Crimsoux: The Supreme Species

The atmosphere around him ruptured as Enzo stood atop a speedy white crane while it blasted across the sky.

"Faster, faster, faster!" He urged the big bird. "When Jiten's like that, there's no telling what could happen."

He moved his wrist closer to his face. "Hey, Jiten! Are there any landmarks around? Or just any thing that can serve as a clue to find you?"

"Well... I —I think I'm in a hallway. It's so dark and I can't move. The light, the blue light makes me scared... It's dangerous... It's dangerous."

"Woah, woah! Don't say that!" Enzo yelled nervously. "... Whatever you do, do NOT walk towards that blue light! In fact, don't walk at all!"

"Good— Hey watch it!" Enzo yelled as a young woman suddenly rushed past him on her own flying bird. The woman looked behind her and stuck out her tongue at Enzo before flying away.

The Marble Boy, Palette Kid and Voodoo Shadow Man PT. II