In a mystical realm of Eldoria, an extraordinary establishment emerged amidst the bustling streets of the capital city of Luminaire Kingdom.
It wasn't long when unusual people visit there to browse grimoires online, engage in epic virtual duels, and ... share magical memes.
The owner named Luke—
Luke: "System! Stop the narration. This is just a normal internet cafe with a handsome owner. Or rather, you're the unusual one!"
System: "..."
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Yes, this novel is good and fun to read. However, it is as clear as the sky that the author did not write this novel with his own imagination instead he used ChatGPT, an AI tool, to write this novel.In fact, anyone could do the same by using an AI tool, however, it completely erases the essence a novel should have. The lengthiest explanation for every little detail, repeated word use such as "stark contrast to", "very fiber of space, her own being, reality, etc", and appearance of many such words and sentences are proof that the author used AI to write the novel. And exactly this caused the lack of "conversation" between characters in this novel. This novel, though fun to read, soon becomes a boredom where it becomes difficult to continue reading.In fact, it is alright if the author is using the AI, at least proofread it one or two times and add more conversations as well as occurrence of events, remove unnecessary explanations that filled the chapters, and give more screentime to the Protagonist instead of side characters and their story.
awesome!! keep up the good work you will have my stones[img=recommend]
Amazing!! Good job author i like the character's interaction and the mc's mysterious background(Only for the customers) also will it be a solo romance or a harem? Its okay if neither just continue and dont drop this.
for now 😁😁🤩😁🤩 will you be putting games or drama/anime
The novel is good itself. However, what truly lowers the score of the novel is the endless explications, endless descriptions and that the MC doesn’t seem to be the MC….
Too many unnecessary words, to describe a moment the author takes 2 to 3 paragraphs! It is not possible!
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hope you come back soon 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good.[img=update] .................................................
this the definition of words too many long, and big words I have smol brain 20000 words per chapter and mostly big words so lore so .much more and po-
Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good. [img=proud]