VRMMORPG: The Land Of Essenxia
Author: Shoudansuki
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I've known this game since its release which is 2 months ago,
and only now have I could finally be able to play it!
But I gotta log off for school though
but it's okay since someone finally talked to me and it's a girl!
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Even though the writing and storytelling might need some improvement, it is still understandable and fun to read. It's kinda unique that you add the break-the-fourth-wall element in the novel, such as saying that the protagonist is dumb etc. Overall, I hope you still keep writing and improve in the future. Tip: each chapter should at least have 1000 words; it should not be less than that. That is just my opinion.