The chapters need a little work on the grammar (a little proofreading would do) , but if you take the author being a new one it is understandable.
Jonny is one hell of fella, remove his dual personalities. I hope to see them split in the future.
Anyways, more chapters!
The chapters need a little work on the grammar (a little proofreading would do) , but if you take the author being a new one it is understandable. Jonny is one hell of fella, remove his dual personalities. I hope to see them split in the future. Anyways, more chapters!