Invincible: Sentry

Really difficult to understand the story because of the constant switching of povs and the lack of description, the lack of description is really annoying because we don’t know what the fanfic is even about or what changes you made from the original

Is the mc just Mark but his name is Sentry and not invincible now? Definitely not what i was expecting.

I like everything you done so far please do not dropped this.

It’s good so far the people feel like real characters and it’s not just a copy and paste of the original story however I hope you continue to update and not drop the story thank you very much

I appreciate the concept but my only issue is that the writer is making the grammar needlessly complicated. He/she should learn that a good book isn't meant to be too hard to read cus advanced grammar just ruins the immersion.