YOUNG SHELDON: JOHN COOPER

YOUNG SHELDON: JOHN COOPER

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Author: DaoistR9LvNZ
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He was reborn into the world of Young Sheldon with 2 growth templates of what his potential would be, Leonardo Da Vinci and Mycroft Holmes from BBC Sherlock Holmes.

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I'm rewriting this without using AI so that I can track the progress not, also to practice myself if I want to continue writing fiction since I know that many don't like AI-generated contents

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D_eta015
D_eta015

So far, it is alright, it has a lot of potential to going to different directions. I feel like it needs a bit more dialogue, descriptions, and little more world building. Maybe throw in a few curveballs and some problems the MC needs to deal with. Make the character feel more real, have him some flaws, make him face challenges. It would make the MC varied and nuance with his personality and traits. I wish you the very best on writing this! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4 days ago
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Choejhulkp
Choejhulkp

Interesting. Four Coopers and a twin for Georgie. Keep it up. I'm interested and want to see how it progresses when Georgie and Elliot hit High school.

10 days ago
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HooLeeFuk
HooLeeFuk

Interesting idea. Sign me up.

9 days ago
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eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18

This is awesome! The story is fast but not too fast that we barely connect with the characters. It's exactly the right amount of pace to show the bond the family. If I had to say a problem, it would be the neglect of some family members like Missy and Mimaw. For the first few chapters, I was even wondering if the author forgot that Missy exist. I was just wondering where's their grandmother in all of this.

10 days ago
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empire1
empire1

I'm really liking the story but a lot of the details from the show are wrong. I get giving them a computer they never had in cannon to fasilatate story progression, but the age difference between the twins is wrong (Georgie is 4/5 years older then sheldon NOT 2) If sheldon is 5 then its at least 4 Yrs before the show which means George Sr. still has his well paid coaching job that he lost for reporting cheating. But the story makes a point of the family struggling financially. Advice to author I really thing you need to get the detail right or go AU and explain why/how the background has changed.

5 days ago
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Mad_Governor
Mad_Governor

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9 days ago
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