YOUNG SHELDON: JOHN COOPER

Interesting. Four Coopers and a twin for Georgie. Keep it up. I'm interested and want to see how it progresses when Georgie and Elliot hit High school.

So far, it is alright, it has a lot of potential to going to different directions. I feel like it needs a bit more dialogue, descriptions, and little more world building. Maybe throw in a few curveballs and some problems the MC needs to deal with. Make the character feel more real, have him some flaws, make him face challenges. It would make the MC varied and nuance with his personality and traits. I wish you the very best on writing this! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is awesome! The story is fast but not too fast that we barely connect with the characters. It's exactly the right amount of pace to show the bond the family. If I had to say a problem, it would be the neglect of some family members like Missy and Mimaw. For the first few chapters, I was even wondering if the author forgot that Missy exist. I was just wondering where's their grandmother in all of this.

don't come across many Sheldon Cooper and this one five stars keep it up and you get all my power stones

Interesting idea. Sign me up.

Good, continue! I like very much about how you give the protagonist the mind of the family, when Sheldon comes, they probably make sheldon cry a lot, try to make him more mature thanks to John

I love this book so far it's superb and iIwould 100% recommend it to everyone. also may later he can have another template with physical abilities not op just some human limit or something when the story is stegnating or he desperately needs it or like when his development in some areas are filled the temperature is merged fully so he can have another one

I'm really liking the story but a lot of the details from the show are wrong. I get giving them a computer they never had in cannon to fasilatate story progression, but the age difference between the twins is wrong (Georgie is 4/5 years older then sheldon NOT 2) If sheldon is 5 then its at least 4 Yrs before the show which means George Sr. still has his well paid coaching job that he lost for reporting cheating. But the story makes a point of the family struggling financially. Advice to author I really thing you need to get the detail right or go AU and explain why/how the background has changed.

i haven't read it yet but the Idea of using Template of real world Genius is something i haven't seen before so for me the Novel deserves a 5 star just for that alone

I am giving you a good review based on your first couple of chapters, I hope that you can keep up a good pace with the story progression. I would like you to not stick to the YS script with just some basic input from john.

I read up to chapter 6 and I'm enjoying it, it's going well, thanks for sharing. 🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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i read the story, mc is 4 years old.

your earlier draft was better, your MC here is all over the place and lacks humanity. It was disappointing that you scrapped your previous work and overwrote it with this one.