Welcoming the Chaos

I'm drowning in the amount of dialogues TT (I'm not used to it, sorry.) The chapters seem long too, which honestly, justifies the amount of uploads a month. So far, good potential for a comic maybe. would like to see how things develop ^^

After reading the old and new versions you definitely are writing better. Hopefully the pacing isn't as rushed as the old one. Anyway, Looking forward how you handle the other chapters and new ones.

10,000 views, finally back on track from my original version of Welcoming the Chaos, thank you! I'm hoping I'll surpass my original views and looking towards the future for what's to come :)

I am up to date on the story. I can say that it is a good story. A good job has been done. The characters, the development, the world are all good enough. I can't say that I experienced any boredom while reading it. You certainly did a good job. As for the suggestion part, I think it is not right to constantly assign an adjective to predicates. For example, "I'm leaving." his voice was harsh. It is normal to use this at the beginning, but as the story progresses and we get to know the character, the reader should be able to understand such things. Of course, you are the author, the decision is yours. Finally, I wonder how long the story will be, it seems like there are strange events that can be told.

I have seen some reviews that say that the chapters are long, frankly they did not seem that long to me since they were very entertaining, it is also good to be careful with the length, not all readers like a more difficult reading. For the rest, a good job, looking forward to reading it when it is developed a little more

Holy moly. I can tell this is going to be an epic adventure already. The first chapter was pretty funny. Can't wait to see those characters again. haha.

tbh I'm liking it overall, was gonna read the old one but I don't see any point in doing that. Although for me personally I feel like you could make parts more descriptive.

Hello everyone, I want to thank everyone who reads my novel and hopefully sticks for the journey. I promise I'll finish the story this time around and even add more to the overall universe, possibly with more novels. Thank you again for reading! :)

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