starfield chronicles ( prototype story )

this is experimental story for my upcoming story , starfield chronicles, if you have any suggestions to make main story better please let me know. the story follows the protagonist Ryujin in a distant world where magic, superpowers, demons and many fantasies are real. The story progresses as Ryujin is inspired by a man to follow his dreams of becoming the aether king. He joins the magical school in his state and makes many new friend, allies and even enemies. The struggles he faces, the relationships he develops to become the aether king are the main contents of this novel.