NEON'S PREY

The chapter more or less tells you what happened in the prison world which is enough to catch my attention and well that's what caught my attention. I really like those beginnings where they don't just tell me what happened. “And the world went to shit.” No, here he really told me how it went to shit haha I would have liked a little bit more about what happened and other things, but if it was like that the chapter would go on forever.

more chapters please 🥺 i love the development

I enjoyed reading it. It's unpredictable. How this story goes is just a matter of preferences and as a reader who loves fantasy I definitely prefer this!

A captivating mix of mystery and action as a golden key changes the protagonist's life in a post-apocalyptic world. The intricate world-building, suspenseful plot, and unique characters keep readers hooked. While the pace starts slow, it builds into an engaging and immersive tale filled with magic, danger, and survival. A must-read for fantasy enthusiasts looking for something fresh and thrilling!

The story is cool, still reading, it engaging except the first........ One but it worth reading. Interesting storyline and it's good. Continue writing author don't relent on it. Please make changes in that year in chapter one

the first chapter drag on about the world change, it drag on for sometime, other than that I really love the story, the story can be very captivating if the write is consistent

Hi, at first when I started reading this novel I had a lot of information at once, which is why I personally don't like that, but the novel begins to take shape and everything starts to make sense little by little and it keeps you hooked on knowing what will happen next.

Honest Review on how I feel about this story, It has the potential to be epic and it will be if the author keeps writing, I love everything about it from the world building to it's intriguing descriptions, I will just tell anyone checking out whether to read and is a lover of Sci Fi Fantasy this is a book for you .

Hi! So I'm gonna leave an honest review for the other readers, the first chapter mostly focused on the introduction of the drastic change of the world and so it was a little bit boring and how it describes the minor characters reaction were a little cringe because I can't put myself in their shoes, however when I read further to the chapter my interest was piqued because of how the people who disappeared said that the tower was a scam and ofcourse, the protagonist finally appeared so yeah. Then lastly, the next chapters were a little drag too but I don't know how I was able to read it without getting bored though?! Which is a good thing because that means the story is not boring at all even though the first chapters are mostly about description! So for my rating for now, I'll do writing quality 5 because I like it, story development 4, updating stability 4, and ofcourse, I love apocalypse theme so I'm gonna do the world background a 5! But I will change this as the story progresses either in the good way or bad way! so be prepared dear author-san! :)

the first chapter was a bit drag and hard to read. But the other chapters were excellent. I like how the story proceeded in the next chapters. Its interesting

Wow, this should be featured in the new story of 2025. It is quite interesting and story flows with ease. Keep on writing. Adding it to my library.

The start was great and the flow of the story is good so far. To be honest, this was quite an interesting read for me. 😆 Hope u keep this interesting until the end cuz I'll keep reading ur book. 👍