He died with regrets but woke up with a second chance.
Reborn into the body of a child, on the night of the Nine Tails' attack, a former doctor, must navigate the chaos of Konoha’s darkest hour, this time as Menma Uzumaki, Naruto’s twin brother.
With memories of a world that he wasn’t supposed to have and the instincts of someone who has already died once, he’s thrust into a world of chakra, war, and written destinies.
But...
This wasn’t supposed to happen.
And his very existence, may have already changed everything.
Now, with fate unraveling around him, Menma must decide,
Will he follow the path written for him or carve a new one, even if it means defying destiny itself and taking the entire world as his preforming stage?
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So far so good . Keep the goodness comin’! I’m hooked. 10 chapters. With most fanfics, I don't reach this point. With the ones I do, I'd have a general picture of what I'm going to get in the future. And it's looking good. This ain't a translation. That has to be said here since the app is swarmed with them nowadays. Please give the story your support. The author is fragile and needs your encouragement. Don't want him dropping this all of a sudden. Do your part and drop your bal- I mean your stones.
Ребёнок лишённый тепла сожжет свою деревню, чтобы согреться 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
one of the best naruto fanfiction. do u have Pateon account?
Godam if this isnt one of the best naruto fanfic books ive read, i dunno what else could be counted. the mc is slowly learning about the world and his place in it. there are some cliches and some comedy moments which you can expect but then there is also lot of character growth, sometimes cheesy, sometimes sad, sometimes hopeful. its written well. give it a try
The beginning of the story is a bunch of nonsense we have to shove down our throats without chewing. then you have to go thru more nonsense as the MC ages. folk say its believable. lol I say its ridiculous but not nacceptable. idk the beginning ruins it for me honestly. I'm trying to look past it, maybe I need to reread it. but calling people big brother dog is so cringe that rereading it will be hard.
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shaping up to be a very very good fanfic , writing and plot are great hope it continues to be this good until the end . One of the very few fics that actually deserve a five star. also [ Snow is the character in this fic ]
Really enjoying the story can’t wait to see more in the future, keep up the great work!
Uma das melhores fanfics de Naruto que vi, sem sombra de dúvidas e a primeira que estou usando o computador para escrever uma crítica. Um começo comum a toda que leio, o cara morre e renasce em um novo mundo sendo ele já existente ou não, sendo crossover ou não. Mas esta fanfic em especial me cativou e deu me gosto haver perdido há muito tempo, consegue trazer a sensação de peso, alegria, tristeza, abandono, fúria escondida, e ânsia para um próximo episodio, só espero que o mc não fale para ninguém que esta e a segunda vida dele (normalmente isso mata a história (talvez só a Kurama e olhe lá), e peço que não pare com a história porque vejo MUITO POTENCIAL e raro obras como esta então continue e não desanime. O Meu Muito Obrigado por trazer está historia. E não vejo a hora de um novo capítulo (Obs.: minha língua nativa não é o inglês. :) ) --------------------------------------------------------------------------- One of the best Naruto fanfics I've seen, without a shadow of a doubt, and the first one I'm using the computer to write a review about. A common beginning for all the ones I read, the guy dies and is reborn in a new world, whether it already exists or not, whether it's a crossover or not. But this fanfic in particular captivated me and gave me the pleasure of having lost it a long time ago, it manages to bring the feeling of weight, joy, sadness, abandonment, hidden fury, and anxiety for the next episode. I just hope the MC doesn't tell anyone that this is his second life (usually that kills the story (maybe only Kurama, and even then), and I ask that you don't stop the story because I see SO MUCH POTENTIAL and works like this are rare, so keep going and don't get discouraged. Thank you very much for bringing this story. And I can't wait for a new chapter (Note: my native language is not English. :) )
one of the best naruto fanfiction I have read so far on webnovel
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this is great i am loving it. looking forward to more,author-san. arigato ozai masu.[img=thinking][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend]