Heir's of Hogwarts

I have to follow the tradition and give myself 5-stars.But seriously i don't think there will be any major problem in this one, can't say anything about those people who find everything bad though.

Amezing stuff i cannot wiat ofr more it so good

The writing quality within this piece is undeniably impressive, showcasing a mastery of language and an ability to captivate the reader. The author's portrayal of the plot and storyline is nothing short of addictive, drawing readers into a compelling narrative that beckons them to stay engaged till the very end. However, amidst the excellence in grammar, there arises a slight concern regarding the overall flow and direction of the storyline, particularly in relation to the young heirs. At this stage, it might be too premature to expect a clearly defined goal for these characters, but it would certainly enhance the reading experience to witness a gradual unveiling of their purpose or a more discernible trajectory as the story unfolds. This addition would further enrich the narrative, providing a more robust and coherent journey for the protagonists, ultimately elevating the overall storytelling experience for the audience.

This is by far my favorite book on this app for hairy potter

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I loved this book I'm really sad it had to end but as always everything good must come to an end

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Excellent work keep it up bro 👍🏿👋👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿

This book checked all my boxes. Character growth, logical improvement, humor, and respect given throughout.

short story but very good fic. little to no Grammer issues

Once I started reading I couldn’t put it down. Unfortunetly it’s completed but I would’ve loved to read more about after it had ended

Thank you for this book. I really liked the way the Founders prepared them for the future, and Hogwarts was as much of a character as anyone else.

It's one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I have read, with a well developed world background, character design, and story development.

I kinda like it but honestly while the story is good I would have preferred less Hogwarts reformation to it's former glory and a bit more characters interactions and self development.