Taking It All From The Protagonist
In a world where power reigns supreme and an overpowered protagonist holds sway, Gates Amon, an ordinary college student, finds himself thrust into a treacherous narrative as a side character fated to die.
Determined to defy destiny, Gates vows to either seize everything from the protagonist or perish trying. As he navigates this perilous world, Gates brings a touch of unpredictability to the story, blurring the line between brilliance and foolishness.
The novel unfolds as Gates challenges the protagonist's luck and fights for his own survival, promising a tale where the unexpected takes center stage....
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Averagewrites here,
This novel has nothing to do with peace and love, but romance will be included in it, the main character is an anti-hero who would not allow even the ant that takes a crumb of his survive.
His skill however makes whoever he puts his seal on, amplify his own skill [MC] by ten times the amount of the one who carries his seal, and guess who he puts his seal on?
Enjoy reading.
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I don't know how to describe what I feel, it just felt a waste of time to read this. The story is that bad. Originally, I wouldn't have read this after the author said the romance will be where fl might die before getting replaced since I hate that. But there was next to no romance till now, making me read. Here starts my real review: Writing Quality: It isn't amazing or bad. Just average with many typos. Readable, nonetheless(better than 50% on this app...) Story: Guess how much time passed? 2 days. Yep, you read that right. That's how you know this has next to no story, let alone development. At least, that's how it appeared to me. Characters: The side characters are well-written and their description make them feel somewhat real. The problem is the MC, the one we are supposed to read. He has positives, like he is an adult. Unfortunately, his smartness, cunning, and planning nature is forgotten as the book continues. All that's left is an adult in a child's body with impulsive anger disorder. You can prolly guess what happens, right? He wants everyone under him and in control, he doesn't trust anyone. Just making them sign sla. ve contracts... Now, that is understandable, given the world, but if you read, you will understand what I mean. World background: Non-existent. Conclusion: Not my cup of tea. If you like an edgy, immature, Protagonist, then go for it. Despite the story having a good premise, it just failed to meet any expectations one can have... I hope you don't delete my review and improve yourself as an author...
a good read, great command of English and conversations aren't rigid but rather flow into one another. the chapter length might need some improvement but hey I know how hard it is to write, keep up the good work
I guess I can finally read one where I don't have to feel like I will punch my screen. Haha... I should have a good time hating on the dumb hero and loving this villain~~
Hope to see you continue the story. I’d like to see how it ends
love thia novel and tbe characters, keep it up👍
I barely read 58 chapters, but I stopped liking it, the narrative and everything became dramatic, a lot of drama for small things that the MC did and hearing the decisions he made, it seemed like they were decisions that decided the life and death of the world when they were just things simple and that's it.
I read only 3 chp , i liked i will donate 2 powerstone
5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing
An actually good story on this app. Currently at chapter 14 and I can't stop reading it.
The grammar and whatnot is excellent. The updates are consistent. The story develops nicely. The characters seem interesting, but I'd like more vivid breakdowns of different ones at the start (instead of that dynamic with the MC). The style is distinct and really stands out from most. Being a visual person, I'd like to know more about what the characters look like and the view of the environment around them. The worldbuilding is great. This is an interesting read for people who appreciate magical adventures. To the writer, I welcome you to check out my original fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger" it is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". It can be found here on Webnovel with a quick search. You may want to read the first chapter or two of AMJ to get a feeling of what the first story was like but that isn't necessary.
One of the Authors who like to stretch the unnecessary and make the smallest possible chapters.On chapter 46 or 49 and I can't believe I wasted so many fast passes.There are many annoying grammatical, punctuation and missing words and I don't know if this is just translated but it somehow it works.
Shameless review from Averagewrites... You found a different world, where desires are what pushes you. I found desires and put in my world, its just the beginning...After the dust settles is when you see the plans, add to your library and get ready for the long, slow journey through a world of only desires. P.S : When Gates leaves the City.
finally a good villain novel👍.............
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