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"Apologies to everyone for the unresolved technical issue. Therefore, I will be reuploading this book under a new name and with a slight twist in the story as a gesture of apology. New Title: "Eternal Conquest: The Endless Pursuit of Immortality and Death" The chapters for the aforementioned book will be uploaded from March 3rd. You can locate it within the original Works section of my author profile. For new readers, I encourage you to explore the original book for a richer reading experience. This current version will remain available on the platform for a few days before it is removed."

Hello readers , It's Vasudeva , this book is my very first work on web novel. I hope you like and appreciate the work. And constructive criticism for the betterment are always welcomed :)

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Can't say much cause it's still developing but whatever is given is not . I hope the future developments are good too. Waiting for further updates.

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First two chaps seems good but i feel it is a little slow development in story , but other than this i find the MC background and world building fantastic uptil now

Character and world building are good. I hope the updates will become stable in the future . The thing i loved the most was characters background and how he moves with it.

I completely recommend reading this book, so far so good. Other than the mystery and dark thing. The comedic element is also very good.

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Rewriting this review , although the author is quite heartless but the story is good.

Loving this novel, it feels so good and refreshing too, keep continuing your work it's great.

I am new here on WN so don't much know the level but this , i liked but sometimes at some places it becomes quite slow (not boring) and on other side quite fast.

I am not a dark story reader but it caught my attention in the fresh stories and kind a liked it but prologue seemed more creepy than dark to me.