Path of the Twin Swords
Author: AmorphousVacantia
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The twin gods have been the guardians of the Seiren lands, maintaining the balance between life and death for ages. However, nearing the end of their era, they decided to pass on this responsibility to humans. They sealed themselves within the swords, and chosen individuals among humans became the owners of these swords, inheriting the duties of the gods. This tradition has continued to this day. Our story begins with the training of the chosen ones, Tadashi and Yu, whose bond as siblings and their future actions will alter the destiny of Seiren.
information: Please forgive me for any mistakes, as my English proficiency level is not extremely high.
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This fantasy story is a refreshing take on the classic tale of gods and humans, with the added twist of twin gods passing on their responsibilities to chosen individuals through divine swords. The writing is engaging and the characters of Tadashi and Yu hold a special bond as siblings that adds a layer of depth to the story. The author's imagination and storytelling skills are evident in the magical world of Seiren that they have created. The action and drama in the story kept me hooked till the end, and I can't wait to see how the chosen ones will alter the destiny of Seiren. A must-read for fantasy fans!
Hello, I wanted to evaluate myself as a writer. First of all, I must say that the beginning of my story is a bit weak, but my story was the beginning of the creation of something beautiful. I gained a lot of experience while writing my story. I improved my writing skills and I could feel it. This was beautiful. Anyway, this is not a place where I need to explain myself. If I had to criticize myself, I liked some parts of my story and some parts I didn't like. I couldn't use the potential of some characters and I couldn't achieve the development result I wanted. While the main character's development was progressing well, he could not turn into the person I wanted at the end. This disappointed me. In conclusion, my story had great potential, but I could not fully use it. My final comment did not fully satisfy me in the final part. The reason for this is that I did not achieve the character development result I wanted. And I apologize that my English is not very good right now, but I will reflect it very well in my story. You will understand this in a way in my 3rd novel. The perfect way to turn a minus into a plus.
Alrighty, for your first novel, this is pretty good! I'll admit, there are writing errors, but that's to be expected and which you can easily fix. I definitely felt like some parts were dragged out for way too long, and naming one off characters only to be killed wasn't exactly necessary either. But there are definitely interesting ideas you managed to create, 'the entity' can easily show up in any of your other stories should you decide to create any. I personally feel like being a cosmic being unable to physically change the world, but influence is an idea I like very much. You can practically make your stories connected somehow, or at least reference this story within your other future ones. Overall, for your first story, it's okay, there are ideas that work and you should develop more. Also tone down the grim dark stuff next time, admittedly that might make people to stop reading entirely and drop your novel.. 😅