Supreme Husband System! & Supreme Wife System!
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Idan and Arabel both belonged to different strata of society.
Idan came from an ordinary middle-class family, while Arabel came from one of the richest Morgan families.
Besides his parents, Idan has an older sister who is a year older than him. Arabel has a younger twin brother besides her parents.
A year after the global catastrophe, when the world was in chaos, the first awakened ones with superpowers appeared. Among them were Idan's older sister and Arabel's younger brother.
After the first of the ten disasters described in the Revelation received by the people was overcome, a solemn evening was held. It was there that the fate of Idan and Arabel changed dramatically.:
When their eyes met, Idan heard a sudden monotone voice.
[Ding! The perfect user has been found, and the activation of the Supreme Husband System has begun! 5%]
[Ding! The Supreme Husband System Has Been Activated!]
[Ding! The perfect partner has been found, and synchronization with the Supreme Wife System has begun! 1%]
[Ding! The system is synchronized with the Supreme Wife System! 100%]
[The first task of the system has been issued!]
[Propose to your future Wife within 1 day!]
[Failure of the task – deleting the system and losing the opportunity to awakening!]
While Arabel suddenly heard a monotonous voice.
[Ding! The perfect user has been found, and the activation of the Supreme Wife System has begun! 5%]
[Ding! The Supreme Wife System Has Been Activated!]
[Ding! The perfect partner has been found, and synchronization with the Supreme Husband System has begun! 1%]
[Ding! The system is synchronized with the Supreme Husband System! 100%]
[The first task of the system has been issued!]
[Invite your future husband to dance for 1 hour!]
[Failure of the task – deleting the system and losing the opportunity to awakening!]
English isn't my main language, so please bear with it if you found some mistakes.
Greetings to all who have looked at the page of my story! As the author of my creation, I think it deserves a high rating of five stars. Please don't judge me harshly. The story of the creation of this story goes back to the distant past. Initially, I planned to write a completely different story, with different characters, world and plot. But everything changed when I found out about the romance novel contest. This was the impetus for creating this story with new characters. However, I later found out that in order to participate in the contest, the main character must be a woman. But I wasn't upset and decided to continue working on what happened. I will be glad if you support me and don't leave me immediately after reading. I would like to point out that English is not my primary language, so please forgive me for any mistakes. I wish you all a pleasant reading!
I can't believe I just read 2 whole initial chapters without a piece of dialogue 🤣 Author, your premise is very interesting (I personally love no-harem power couple novels), but you should use dialogs, it feels like we are reading a story about another story. It's hard to feel empathy with the characters without dialogs and their thoughts. Anyway, nice story
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Honestly this book is one of my favorite books I have read on WebNovel and even across other websites, the pacing of the story and the development of the characters is perfect, as I am reading the story line is clear and unlike other books I can see the direction the story is going, Overall it is one of the best books and I recommend everyone to read it!!
I love the story so far, the pacing and world building is great but I'm begging you to please use dialog and conversation between characters more often to explain the world and also to develop the characters. Thanks you for the story so far I'm excited to see where it goes. (also please please keep the main characters relationship monogamous, there's plenty of harem stuff out there and I appreciate the relationship they have)
I am absolutely hooked on this novel, just wished there were more chapters😔
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I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future
I binged all the chapters in a couple of days and now I’m sad that I have to wait for daily uploads haha. I think this story has great potential. In my opinion, the key will be nailing the husband and wife aspect of the system. It’s so vague that you could go in any direction, but if the direction you go doesn’t make sense, it will stick out like a sour thumb. I believe in the author though! Also, I hope that once their relationship grows, there will be more frequent cute, sugar filled moments between the main MCs.
This novel has great potential. Please continue and never stop.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]..............................................................................................................................
always wanted to read a romance in awakening, dungeons novels, with both ML and FL are mc. like to read from both pov. please like every novel don't add separation plot of ML and FL like misunderstanding, powerful force kidnap, cliches we are not good for another, he/she likes someone old love or such, another dimension separation
Generally speaking, a better grasp on English vocabulary and speech would make a good addition to the dialogue writing. The characters have good descriptions and the world building is on point with the plot progression but I feel that the narrative itself could use a little nudge based on the actions the characters are taking. Also, the advice you may have read about 'Show - not - Tell' has better interpretations. Show the actions from the perspective/ thoughts of the character in action rather than telling a description of the situation in which the actions are taking place, there is no fault in the descriptions but a central/dedicated theme allows for more instruments to join the music. Ciao!
interesting to read and different from others.
It's a good book. There are quite a few grammar mistakes like the fact that 'it' is replaced be 'her' a lot and it made it a bit confusing at first but once I got used to it, it wasn't that bad. In the first few chapters there is also a serious lack of dialogue for the characters but once the author realized, the problem was fixed in the later chapters. Now the story itself. I had been looking for a couple system novel for quite a while and I couldn't find one so I was really excited when I found this one. The chapters when they first got the systems were really good, I won't go into details cuz of spoilers, but it was a bit extra but not too much so I enjoyed it. I expected a lot more romance than I got but I guess the romance will start when they get back to Earth which I'm fine with. I just feel like their affection rate increased without them actually getting closer. I'm really hoping that the romance picks up once they get back home. Also I want more dialogue between Idan and Arabel, I want to see them talking more and getting closer instead of it happening in the background and you just say something like 'after going for a walk and talking, the couple had grown closer'. I want to see what they said to each other, that would make the romance between them a bit more real to us instead of just increasing the percentage in the systems.