Picking On A Wireless Connection Or Hole

I found the premise of this novel quite interesting, but I feel unable to keep reading. After years of reading and thousands of novels, this is the first time I’ve ever felt the need to complain about the writing. Not sure if the writing itself is terrible or if the translation is just that bad—feels like a mix of both. I might try running it through an AI later to see if it becomes readable

非常喜欢这个题材和作者的文笔！非常好希望作者能继续写出这么好的作品！加油啊！！！！