Chakra System

I'm attempting to write a cultivation novel infused with Indian elements. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it!

It feels like a good start, though I can guess the theme and how it is going to develop. The character setting is good, and academy-based storylines are my cup of tea. So, I'm waiting for those chapters! But I can't grasp the link between the auxiliary chapter and the storyline, though.

just supporting a fellow Indian ... love from India keep it up bro

The protognist minute character development was good. Writing is clear amd detailed. Hope this isn't dropped after some chapters. And so many heroines?

This is my first time reading a novel and i tried this as it was recommended in the discord. The story was good and writing style is awesome. I felt as if i am reading manga.

I find soo easy and comfortable to read. The format of bolding the conversation alone is super. I can glance a previous chapter quickly. Waiting for more🤩

It's really interesting story . I looked through the synopsis and it caught my attention . The plot is really unique and intriguing . The story is catchy and a lot of twists and turns . It's amazing . Recommended to everyone give it a try

It was bit slow in first 7 chapters but 8 and last chapter was so interesting. waiting for the academy story as it is my favourite genre

Ahh, we all can relate to Aditya at some point hehe. Love the story plot, intriguing character and of course, a gripping start. A refreshing story indeed

Well a very conceptual novel imo. It begins slowly, which is really nice and smooth. Due to the slow start the background also erupts along with the plot which is exactly how I like to write. The story development needs a bit more work. For a slow novel, one must have any other attractive features like mystery or horror Has potential.....

Okay first seven chapters in and this goes straight into the library. -Writing style and overall quality is really good. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. -I’d recomend to work on the stable updates, it’s usually better to schedule your chapters in advance, so your readers have idea when the chapters came out. Aditya is a truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10! (Carefully with the harem trait, it can get boring if the main character is collecting women like stickers, make sure you will avoid this mistake in the future.)

good development and also slow paced is good but make sure not to make it to slow paced and also make sure to describe the world background more specifically and update frequently all in all very good