Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

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my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

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I was tremendously enjoying the story and looking forward to how far the MC can go. But I just couldn't anymore. The world building was decent, with showing that both worlds are different enough and have different societies. It's basically a cut and paste of the beginning of and rough semantics of Shadow Slave, something the autor himself admitted. But the MC is just stupid. Repeatedly. Constantly forgets abilities he has, and has so many Ex Machinas to save his life in fights he should have no business participating in. Then you're constantly slapped in the face, over and over, about how special MC is. Like how much stronger for his level he is, and how much potential he has compared to others.

bro NGL i haven't read the novel but the cover is sick man

Its good. Felt a little like shadow slave but thats not a bad thing. The pacing is great to.

[Alert Spoiler - Cap 121] Does the MC have a hero complex, or is he just stupid? This cave arc is really annoying me—I was really enjoying this story, but now I'm not sure if I should continue. I'll probably read a few more chapters, though... Why is the MC going to fight someone he knows almost nothing about, who has a high chance of killing him? To save people in a world he knows very little about? It's worth noting that he can already return to his own universe—he's completed his objective. He could even just go train somewhere else if he doesn't want to go back yet... But no, he prefers to risk his life constantly and in every possible way.

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I love most aspects of this novel, except one thing.. the romance, and how much of an idiot the protagonist is. he kills a king class beast and is severely injured at the end, and knows his orbs can heal and help him recover, yet he doesn't use them and just the story brushes over that. Mira is an annoying aspect of the story as well, and their reactions to things differ each time. He saw people die, felt nothing and didn't care, but then later he saw the same thing and he got depressed and sad and thinking about life just so the novel can give him a special moment with Mira, which kept happening more than once. Nothing is consistent as their characters/personalities changes depending on the novel. The Author is an idiot that just writes as he goes, the only redeeming part of the novel is the world and his cheat, other than that, the characters make no sense sometimes and the romance or interaction with Mira makes no sense as well, like after knowing each other for a few months, he says she's like family and tells her his secrets, even though she is such an unlikable person as she spies on him when he doesn't tell her what he's hiding. The relationship aspect and Mira are a 0/10

Its not everyday I come across novels this bad, riddled with so many plot holes. The MC remains a complete dimwit yet somehow unravels so-called "genius" schemes that are nothing more than painfully obvious setups. Characters appear out of nowhere, with no explanation of how they got there, as if the story itself forgets about continuity. Their behaviors are inconsistent, often defying logic, making it impossible to take any of them seriously.

A pretty good and interesting story , the fights are not dragged too much which is what I like. The characters are fleshed out and have different personalities , the bad guys or the villains are not dumb they have their own schemes and stuff. The mc is a teenager who was not exposed to the outer world so he is a little naive but certainly not dumb and he adapts very quickly so him being dumb won't be a problem . Overall a pretty interesting story and good easy to read writing make it a must read if you like these types of story. Pretty excited to see where this story will go. SPOILER AHEAD !!! Message for Author - Keep going Author your work is certainly a top tier , Also I like the way how Alex and Mira relationship is going . I would certainly like to see their relation grow more . And maybe how they fight together in duo .

story telling and world building is decent. but the characters development, discussions conversations, are horrible. and I mean literally horrible. plus the plot armor is too big. and character is dumb I mean who would accept a meeting with strangers

I think the author is decent and so is the writing but I give up with this mc. Over 280 chapters in and little to no mental development from him. Hero complex (and im someone who doesnt mond that and dislikes ruthless MCs) but does everything with 0 preparation, takes unnecessary risks and alwYs fights to the point of collapsing in a jungle or a battlefield. He should be dead atleast 4 times.