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pedophilia.. teacher want to date the main character. Main character is a child.

love the book great work really a fun of the originals and tvd great work can't wait for more

well this novel is kind of good but they are just lot of things that does not make sense like mc being a vampire progenator like does the author even Know the skill of a vampire progenator before writing a novel try checking the power you gave to your mc unless you we end ruining your novel.

It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.

Very very good love it just make sure to fix the translations because right now it’s hard to understand

Just needs the words to be polished but other than that it's a good novel

if there are typos in the synopsis, can you imagine what the novel is like?

congratulations on 222 chapter////////@///

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5 star just because the mc name is taufik hidayat 😂

the story wasn't awful intially but as soon as you get into the paid chapters the author starts adding nonsense to up the word counts to make chapters more expensive and even regularly adds massive "a/n" of just one sentence on repeat like something stupid like "I love football" just to boost wordcount. All around the story could have been good but I can't continue to support this author's antics.

Even with the translation issues, it's a very good novel. Keep writing author your doing just fine.

Okay, so this novel, based on my assessment (after reading till chapter 18) is that the world background has a potential that's why I gave it 5 stars, while for others it's just average pacing seems to fast like how the MC just got straight to a relationship. I know this was considered months but most of it is skipped so there is not enough background. The fights I've seen also feel like street fights, nothing serious for example the assassination which they resolved pretty easily after defeating them, this assassin clan is dubbed as silent killer but felt like a friendly gangster in a good neighborhood. Also this web novel has elements of a wuxian novel which you guessed it, there is a young master trope and death seeking clan with matching death wish dialogue. So it can potentially have many side quests if this persists in chapter progression which is not bad if you like this kind of plot. For problems, there are some grammatical errors (maybe a lot of them, I'm still reading so it might have lessened) which is still bearable, I've seen much worse translation ☠️. Lastly, updates are good for now 😊.

it's gooooooooooooood! highly recommend ✨ Manifesting the