Demon Lord: Erotic Adventure in Another World

This book it’s great, it keeps getting better a it goes, I recommend it. Ps don’t stop reading until the 40+ chapter and you’ll understand. Author pls don’t drop it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Everything is written so strangely; there are many events happening at once, yet it feels like nothing is really happening. It lacks so many details, and the main character comes across as foolish because of his actions. For example, in the first chapters about the summoning: he’s summoned but doesn’t even notice, doesn’t realize he’s in a huge castle instead of a classroom, introduces himself without noticing he’s standing away from his classmates, and then there’s no description of his thoughts on being summoned or suddenly being in another world. He starts analyzing the people around him and the king, but no real information about his analysis is provided. During his first night in the castle, we get nothing about how he got there, his thoughts, nothing. Then this fox character shows up, and everything becomes too random. It feels like trying to retell a dream but without remembering enough details, creating a jumbled mess of random information. That analogy perfectly describes the first chapters of this novel, and I won’t be reading any further.

When it showed in my recommendations I decided to give it a try and I don’t regret it. It’s quite good. I have high hopes for this novel. I rarely start to read novels that have less than 300-400 chapters that aren’t finished. Author plz don’t drop this I hope to read it for a long time;)

I just realized you are the authors who is writing Devouring Monarch as well. 😁 I read that one everyday too. I must say, I am enjoying this novel better. Keep it up!

Really great book so far! The characters are engaging and the overall story is well though out and written

author do you have discord..............

What an amazing read! Character building is exceptional with the side characters written so well you remember them! I have read 100s of random novels and this take of a berserk heavy weapon wielding physcopath is refreshing! Author writes really well and gives you a ton of chapters free to get you hooked! A must read if you are into Barbarian Blood Shed!

i cant find a problem its good and i love it

The description of this book looks really good but the only thing that stands out that I dont like is the MCs weapon... No book has the MC have an ax... If the MCs weapon was different I would definitely read this right away but because of the weapon I wont read it till I run out of the other books that im reading.

I don't know why but I find myself confused sometimes reading so far. for some reason I can't pin point exactly what it is but I'm enjoying what I'm able to grasp so far and keeping up the reading. idk if it's the Grammer, spelling, way the transitions to iner monolog and verbal are used but man it's confusing. as I said though I'm enjoying what iv gotten so far and keeping on reading. Hopefully gets easier. idk if it's the editor or self edited but since I'm early into the chapters as of commenting Hopefully mistakes have been corrected cause I have a feeling this is gonna be a banger of a read if author keeps at it and not abandon it.

Need to update the characters for the new members of the harem

I really like this book. I couldn’t make it 5 stars total nonetheless mainly because there is some other letter style sometimes and it’s black even if you read in dark mode so I always have to go back and switch because you can’t possibly read it otherwise.

Because I thought it would be fun I messed with the character rankings and made Yumiko #1 instead of #4.

I must say this book, from the first page, had me hooked as soon as I started reading it. I couldn't stop