Given a second chance by a R.O.B Kenzo traded his knowledge of the Naruto story in exchange for being born a sage. Keeping his power a secret Kenzo must make his way in the unforgiving and dangerous world he has found himself in.
I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.
2 months ago
5
YourDad_
MC is way too dumb for my tastes[img=disgusted]..
2 months ago
3
Obligation
It reads like a summery of a story or even a diary.
3 months ago
3
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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3 months ago
2
Koloja
Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.
4 months ago
2
Gabriel_Franco_7066
Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias
3 months ago
1
tiecky
nice a sage fanfic love those fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
5 months ago
1
Cevahir_Gezer
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5 months ago
1
Abhijith_Vc
I am giving it 5 star because its by the most satisfying naruto fic i read recently. I am not saying its the best fic out there it has flaws but it was enjoyable read and i am eagerly waiting the next chapters .
Keep up the good work
7 days ago
0
comonerStafford
This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great
12 days ago
0
Daedra
Fun read with a dence op mc. Love all of the authors work
Great story, it's fun without any of the edgier cliches most authors like to cram in to their fics.
I love that it'd laid back but is more than ready to burst with action and comedy
a month ago
0
Drakeayr
Honestly a good solid story, it’s very unique and is one of those where the novel/character is only as smart as the author. Then the author is literally brilliant and a very good at putting it into their writing. The author is very good a writing as well(something you would expect from a top novel instead of a fanfic). The author is also good languist as in he has a large vocabulary that shines through in certain places and has good grammar.
Overall I like the intelligence of the character and novel as well as the unique power system that the character builds up.
Lost interest in it pretty fast. Very cliche.
I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.
MC is way too dumb for my tastes[img=disgusted]..
It reads like a summery of a story or even a diary.
who is mc Love interest ???[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.
Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias
nice a sage fanfic love those fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
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I am giving it 5 star because its by the most satisfying naruto fic i read recently. I am not saying its the best fic out there it has flaws but it was enjoyable read and i am eagerly waiting the next chapters . Keep up the good work
This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great
Fun read with a dence op mc. Love all of the authors work
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Great story, it's fun without any of the edgier cliches most authors like to cram in to their fics. I love that it'd laid back but is more than ready to burst with action and comedy
Honestly a good solid story, it’s very unique and is one of those where the novel/character is only as smart as the author. Then the author is literally brilliant and a very good at putting it into their writing. The author is very good a writing as well(something you would expect from a top novel instead of a fanfic). The author is also good languist as in he has a large vocabulary that shines through in certain places and has good grammar. Overall I like the intelligence of the character and novel as well as the unique power system that the character builds up.