Naruto-The secret sage

Lost interest in it pretty fast. Very cliche.

I read up to Chapter 40 and I'm dissatisfied about how the story is written in the 1st point of view much like narration or diary few dialogue and interactions with other characters making the story like monotone Narration. The annoying part is the MC often handed his Made up Jutsus demanded by Hokage for preservation with some price or compensation that didn't even explain what price/ cost he receive.

It reads like a summery of a story or even a diary.

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At first I thought this story was great, I thought it was 5 stars because I really liked it sadly as time went by every chapter that was once good is now mediocre. Author I recommend you to read from the beginning your own story and think if you are really following a good story line or just writing for the sake of writing.

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Ahem good narrative, grammar doesn't matter to me, I like the character of the mc, good strength development, the interactions are good I guess although there is a need to improve on that.

Te da la impresión de ser naruto pero bastante diferente con una pizca de "slice of life" y hace que la historia sea más tranquila de lo normal. Perfecto si te interesa ese tipo de historias

nice a sage fanfic love those fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

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I am giving it 5 star because its by the most satisfying naruto fic i read recently. I am not saying its the best fic out there it has flaws but it was enjoyable read and i am eagerly waiting the next chapters . Keep up the good work

This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great

Fun read with a dence op mc. Love all of the authors work

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