Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

My biggest issue with this story is how the author uses too much detail for every little thing. I don’t need to know how the desks are arranged in a room, I don’t need to know about the posters on the wall of a classroom, And I don’t need to know that the chairs in the classroom are comfortable, unless the character outright states it when he sits on it. There are more examples of this throughout the 11 chapters that I read.

Warning, mc in this is severly nerfed. SPOILER BELOW Mc unlocks 3 tomoe sharingan at 7, then loses to a random 8 year old hyuga in a taijutsu match. His chakra is "nearing chunin level" while he's a genin, he knows no genjutsu at this point in the story, sharingan has gone from copying ninjutsu to giving a tutorial on how the jutsu works. If you've read the Wind Demon fanfic it feels like the author wanted to go for the same direction but completely failed to understand why Wind Demon worked. The mc there was some random who was talented at wind release and thats all, here the mc has 2 of the most busted bloodlines, and training from a jonin since a young age but still shruggles to be barely above average.

I can see that the author is taking inspiration from Naruto: the wind calamity and that's not a bad thing. The story by itself is good and the writing quality is much better than the usual web novel fanfics but its still not the best as in some parts of the fanfic the author makes the mc really stupid and give away some of his info about the ms sharingan when the mc wouldn't ever do that as he is very cautious. Other than that its been great and hopefully this doesn't somehow turn into a harem

I am the fifth review

Reveal Spoiler

i feel that the MC is too weak, and the author writes too many long-winded stories, lots of unimportant information and nonsense, honestly im very disappointed, i've been waiting so long (into my bookmark) till the chapter got hundreds more 😥😥

pls tell me u will change the original events like obito or not? as I don't want to waste my time reading the same thing as watching the anime u see.

Would have been better if the mc actually showed any uzumaki traits like boosted chakra vitality and regeneration

There is not much to say since there are very few chapters but it seems a promising novel. Let's just hope it doesn't get dropped 😔😔

meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh

Good story and character. I hope it goes to the end

The love interest better not be a OC, if it’s is drop your ip

Another ai assisted author with a bit more indulgance in the story than the rest. Ai assisted anyway. 4 stars is most I can possibly give. If you read a fanfic with a bit generic storyline, overtly unnecessary detailing of completely non important stuff, no foreshadowing, no recalling, no hype, no major character development just pure unadulterated generic writing then go ahead. This one though is a bit less generic than most

It is a good read. Author is definitely improving.