dont stop this story man. its great and got huge potential
10 months ago
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MARLENE_ANGEL
THE AUTHOR LOVES THIS NOVEL BUT NOT WHY BIG DADDY WHITEBEARD THE NARUTO COULD USE A LOVING FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD BECAUSE THE ADULTS IN NARUTO ABUSE AND BRAINWASH KIDS IN THE NARUTO WORLD NEED OF A FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD., AFTER THE WAR WHITEBEARD APPEARED IN NARUTO WORLD.
10 months ago
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VonBritannia
its really good. read it worth yo time and its only 2 chap so far
10 months ago
19
LuminousRequiem
More please, haven't seen a fanfic with garp in naruto world,, moree!!!!!! more!!! more more!!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!!
5 months ago
17
Danilo_Vitor_2040
Cool and interesting to read I hope the story continues to be good lol kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
10 months ago
14
Gd_Sys
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
10 months ago
10
alexbabyyahoo
really great novel 😁👏😁👏 but don't try to whitewash hiruzen and danzo 🤮🤮🤮
great story, please don’t quit this job, and this rating is only for chapter 2, I’m looking forward to the continuation💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
9 months ago
6
Zazory_01
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9 months ago
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Akeesha_12
is it a younger version of garp or old garp? 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
4 months ago
3
Cipher_Z
a lot of these stories change the characters to fit their morals and beliefs but you kept it on point for garp so thanks cant wait for more
dont stop this story man. its great and got huge potential
THE AUTHOR LOVES THIS NOVEL BUT NOT WHY BIG DADDY WHITEBEARD THE NARUTO COULD USE A LOVING FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD BECAUSE THE ADULTS IN NARUTO ABUSE AND BRAINWASH KIDS IN THE NARUTO WORLD NEED OF A FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD., AFTER THE WAR WHITEBEARD APPEARED IN NARUTO WORLD.
its really good. read it worth yo time and its only 2 chap so far
More please, haven't seen a fanfic with garp in naruto world,, moree!!!!!! more!!! more more!!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!!
Cool and interesting to read I hope the story continues to be good lol kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
really great novel 😁👏😁👏 but don't try to whitewash hiruzen and danzo 🤮🤮🤮
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nice
great story, please don’t quit this job, and this rating is only for chapter 2, I’m looking forward to the continuation💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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is it a younger version of garp or old garp? 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
a lot of these stories change the characters to fit their morals and beliefs but you kept it on point for garp so thanks cant wait for more
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I can see this getting famous