DCU: Split

On a more serious note. Most of the characters I have written already have a goal, have a journey and have power. I wanted to do something different, there will be ups and downs mistakes and succes. Nolan will go through this journey with you the reader and mature into something quite fitting for DC. Hope you enjoy

Author your aura shines through this work of fiction. Tears brought to my eyes as I read deeper, they were tears of happiness. You are magnificent

It is a very interesting concept.The man with different personalities with different skill sets. I think it has lots of potential, and I can't wait for the next chapter

It has a unique premis and is well executed. The chapters flow smothly and doesn’t have and glaring plotholes. The characters that are introducerades feel like real people and gotham is portrayed quiet well.

Shit is so good it's like reading a new DC official comic book about a new anti-hero/Villian? Not really villain honestly. The story is also so immersive I forget to even comment a single time for over 14 chapters. Please read it!

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This is Amazing! I can't say it enough. The characters are well-written and don't feel stale or one-dimensional. It was also very impressive how you were able to capture the mood and tone of Gotham. I can’t wait to read more!

So far, the whole thing is developing nicely, at least for me and my mind. I especially like the emphasis on Nolan's personal development. From a de facto social jelly, without a spine, to someone - at least at this point in the story - someone who is at least decisive. Someone who no longer has to rely on his other personalities. Good luck in your further work.