Star Wars: Senator

As of chapter 8, I take back my positive review, it doesn't matter if it's readable if what I'm reading is trash. The author keeps twisting lore and writing every character and organisation as egoless mannequins that only exist to give the MC what he wants, it's just plot convenience after plot convenience, and doesn't read like a lively story, it's just a list of them MC going around shopping.

I tried this story again because It has a unique premise and I believe that if it was written by a competent author then this could have been one of the best star wars fics ever but it is not. The story is not engaging at all because it has no stakes and the MC faces no challenges, this is exemplified in the Kuat Drive Yard chapter where the MC recruits the best starship designer they have with no effort, no discussion, no trade, no nothing, it just happens because the author wants it to. Next he says he can just buy a whole starship manufacturing corporation for 200 million (this is pennies compared to what he's been throwing around) the author just hands his SI everything on a platter because he's to useless to make these things happen organically. Don't get me started on Blissex and his daughter calling the MC's designs genius, they're not even designs, just drawings of the hulls of cannon starships (since if he can actually design starships then he doesn't need Blissex). In short, the author is too unintelligent to write a smart MC so he compensates by making every other character a slackjawed, drooling moron and artificially removing every obstacle in his path. Do not waste your time on this.

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The story is off to a good start and being a senator is new, since most fanfic of Star Wars have force sensitive or soldier in most. Keep up the good story.

The writing quality makes this physically painful to read, I think the author would have more success if he posted this in his native language.

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

I really like this story and like how the story is improving the more chapters i read. Sure the mc gets things easy sometimes but it adds up with both his money, political power and potential. The goal for the mc is clear and the many problems and difficulties he will have in the future makes great opportunities and potential for a very good story. One that i am looking forward to reading. I am also angry that some doesnt even try to understand the story and the characters try to make it harder for the author. They wrote three bad reviews for no good reason just to complain over something that most don't even notice. Just let the author have fun writing something they like, let them out down their imagination and share it with us without trying to kill it because you like complaining. And at least thank you author for a good story ä.

Story in early phase but it has good story line . Author did good amount of research about story but quality is not there yet It will take him to refine the story . But it is good for 1st time writer . Those wha are interested in military and poltitical ploy with action and little bit business building can give it a try .

Well written Star Wars fic Like the political aspects And other aspects such as baca cartel which are explored as part of world building Pls update more frequently if possible 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Author why have you stopped writing this masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is my annual time to review things I like and this is an awesome one I hope you keep updating this but don’t forget to take breaks don’t burn your self out

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This is a great Star Wars fanfic. The way the mc rose power was done well.

Is This dropped ?? I’m just asking because it’s been awhile since the last ch.