Harry Potter: A Different Sirius

well out of all the HP Fanfics this by far one of the best. I like how you made Sirius more grounded and more responsible. I like Harrys character, He's not the weak boy from cannon or the nxt dark lord, he also isnt a pervert or Arrogant.

It's a good idea and mostly well-executed but to be honest it doesn't match my tastes. For example, I like the idea of schemes within schemes in the literature I read but the characters seem more upfront and don't seem to be working towards certain goals but otherwise pretty good.