Some chinese nationalism and acquiring peak human fitness with possible super human senses by killing some cockroaches all in the first chapter.
8 months ago
66
Murod
this translate is good , can you give me the original name please?
8 months ago
12
WiseHermit
Reveal Spoiler
4 months ago
9
Humbuub
great translation, but the biggest mistake translator made is the MC's name is Bi Xiao.
5 months ago
9
Darth_Evolution898
Great writing main character isn't braindead and they actually focus on the story and make progress no harem just power hunting and a few day to day great start fr
8 months ago
5
AmericanNinja85
Great book! Looking forward to the MC’s progession.
7 months ago
5
Runawayy_
Raw name? Very interesting story!........................................................................................................................................
8 months ago
4
CouchPotatoDandy
I have finished reading this fanficial chapter 277 and I can say that till chapter 200 I really loved this fanfic. The translation was done perfectly with nearly no mistakes that I could find, and I could also see that the translator also edited some parts to remove some Chinese elements from the fanfic.
Though I really don't understand why the author insisted on inserting Bella from Twilight universe as a love interest in a Marvel fanfic out of nowhere... That was really unrelated to anything, the MC and Bella also somehow and weirdly got together from nowhere....
Anyway, from chapter 200 the original author made an arc so boring and unrelated to the MC I really just found myself skipping chapters. The ending of the arc was so disappointing that there wasn't any progress or any major character appearing or dying or improving etc... That was till chapter 250~
From chapter 250 there was a brief 15 chapters that I enjoyed with the MC finally appearing it again, and then once again the boring stuff resumed till the end of chapter 277 where the author put a label of "completed" but honestly you can consider this fanfic dropped. There was no ending whatsoever, the MC goals were never reached, the various love interest were never married or had children and many other issues were left open.
So to sum it all up, if you are looking for a fanfic to pass time and enjoy, then this can be for you as long as you don't expect an ending or anything like that.
3 months ago
2
Daoist8WZNOB
author the romance in the novel is killing the vibe
5 months ago
1
ponysha
Хорошо, но мс расист
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This is the best translated fanfic I've ever read
Writing quality 5 stars
Updating stability 5 stars
Story development 5 stars
Character design 5 stars
World background 5 stars
4 months ago
0
zovikova
the pacing feels a bit uneven, and some scenes could use a bit more description to really capture the mood. There are a few grammar issues here and there, but overall, it's an okay read. If you like Wanda, it's worth checking out to see if it picks up in later chapters.
Some chinese nationalism and acquiring peak human fitness with possible super human senses by killing some cockroaches all in the first chapter.
this translate is good , can you give me the original name please?
Reveal Spoiler
great translation, but the biggest mistake translator made is the MC's name is Bi Xiao.
Great writing main character isn't braindead and they actually focus on the story and make progress no harem just power hunting and a few day to day great start fr
Great book! Looking forward to the MC’s progession.
Raw name? Very interesting story!........................................................................................................................................
I have finished reading this fanficial chapter 277 and I can say that till chapter 200 I really loved this fanfic. The translation was done perfectly with nearly no mistakes that I could find, and I could also see that the translator also edited some parts to remove some Chinese elements from the fanfic. Though I really don't understand why the author insisted on inserting Bella from Twilight universe as a love interest in a Marvel fanfic out of nowhere... That was really unrelated to anything, the MC and Bella also somehow and weirdly got together from nowhere.... Anyway, from chapter 200 the original author made an arc so boring and unrelated to the MC I really just found myself skipping chapters. The ending of the arc was so disappointing that there wasn't any progress or any major character appearing or dying or improving etc... That was till chapter 250~ From chapter 250 there was a brief 15 chapters that I enjoyed with the MC finally appearing it again, and then once again the boring stuff resumed till the end of chapter 277 where the author put a label of "completed" but honestly you can consider this fanfic dropped. There was no ending whatsoever, the MC goals were never reached, the various love interest were never married or had children and many other issues were left open. So to sum it all up, if you are looking for a fanfic to pass time and enjoy, then this can be for you as long as you don't expect an ending or anything like that.
author the romance in the novel is killing the vibe
Хорошо, но мс расист ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
just read it...,.........................
Awsm fic, Raw name pls author-san, anyone?
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This is the best translated fanfic I've ever read Writing quality 5 stars Updating stability 5 stars Story development 5 stars Character design 5 stars World background 5 stars
the pacing feels a bit uneven, and some scenes could use a bit more description to really capture the mood. There are a few grammar issues here and there, but overall, it's an okay read. If you like Wanda, it's worth checking out to see if it picks up in later chapters.