Really funny but these clever quips are getting heavy with the loss of meaning and overuse. They are starting to feel taxing instead of whimsical. I recommend less AI and more actual editing and creativity from the author. Or this will go from a 3 to a 2 to a 1. If it starts having more than just silliness and quips it could go from 3 to a 4 or 5. Really it's up to the effort u want to put in if this becomes just shitty annoying AI drivel or really good fanfic.
14 days ago
10
Daoist31LJxu
Spicyyy.
Quite the interesting read, another good ff on twilight aside that one with the immortal human with white hair (if you know you know).
You won’t regret plus…author is really creative with the dialogues especially the …🤐
Read it if you want to know what I’m talking about🙂
18 days ago
5
GeneralColonoscopy
It's not bad so far. I see great potential. Hopefully, you won't drop this.
Really funny but these clever quips are getting heavy with the loss of meaning and overuse. They are starting to feel taxing instead of whimsical. I recommend less AI and more actual editing and creativity from the author. Or this will go from a 3 to a 2 to a 1. If it starts having more than just silliness and quips it could go from 3 to a 4 or 5. Really it's up to the effort u want to put in if this becomes just shitty annoying AI drivel or really good fanfic.
Spicyyy. Quite the interesting read, another good ff on twilight aside that one with the immortal human with white hair (if you know you know). You won’t regret plus…author is really creative with the dialogues especially the …🤐 Read it if you want to know what I’m talking about🙂
It's not bad so far. I see great potential. Hopefully, you won't drop this.