A man finds himself transmigrated into the Potter verse, and all he wants to do is play with magic. It's a shame old men, secret government organisations, politicians and Dark Lords keep meddling in his affairs. At least he can travel the multiverse, right?
[Rated M To Be Safe][Slow Build][Semi/Gamer][Overpowered][OP!OC][SI/OC][Self Insert][AU][Worlds Travelled: Bright, Witcher]
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This fanfiction contains elements of Harry Potter, Elder Scrolls, Star Wars, The Witcher and more.
Enjoy!
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Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, Elder Scrolls or any other works used in this fanfiction aside from the original characters and ideas used.
I don't know if it's your writing style or if you're using ChatGPT, but it's too flowery for me. The system and MC seem alright, I guess, but I didn't read past three chapters because of the writing.
this story has potential. The author just needs to write more chapters
Could not read past chapter 2. Chatgpt is way too annoying. MC says he is an adult but act and thinks like a lost naive child.
cyoa is very rare in ff's and thats what i like about it wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
So far so good. The pre-Hogwarts setup is over. Story is well written well above the normal level of what is found on Webnovel. Can’t wait to see where this goes.
Hello there! Just wanted to thank you guys for reading. You guys are awesome!💯 Enjoy the rest of your day!😁
Much of the story feels off an unnatural. There are also missing commas, and incorrect sentences that can easily lead to misunderstandings, are all over in just the first chapter alone. And the biggest, most relevant issue is the authors use of the annoying [-]-[P]-[W]-[M]-[-] Like what the freak is that? Why is that all over the place for? I can't read this story even if I wanted to with this being pasted in-between every single paragraph. It's ruins the experience and is blatantly in the way.
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's a great fanfic I love it 😍
3|3|4|5|5 The writing quality is alright, gotten much better recently. Earlier chaps were annoying and pretty much completely AI slop or the author didn't know how to use AI properly to edit. Still, there are those annoying monstrous ASCII art-like snippets of the novel's name. Slow updates. It gets better after 20 or so chaps, too bad early chaps gonna scare away the readers. Still, generic op system sht and all the issues that come with it (you know, author forgetting skills, doing dumb sht with points, messed up power lvls, bad math, etc...) I'm slightly overrating coz it has a few 2,1 star reviews and it's not that bad if you get past a few chaps.