Madara Uchiha in Twilight?

This is my Second attempt at Writing a Fanfic and i think its not bad,i written everything personally but just put the Grammar into Chatgpt for my benefit of it enhancing the grammar which it did i hope and i hope it was atleast enjoyable and i will do more chapters slowly trying to get into rhytm and if i will have the motivation

AUTHOR MADARA WILL TRAVEL TO THE MULTIVERSE AFTER THE TWILIGHT ENDING, THE TWILIGHT WORLD IS SMALL FOR MADARA. MADARA COULD TRAVEL INTO THE MULTIVERSE BECAUSE HE HAS KAGUYA, THE RABBIT GODDESS POWER. WORLD TO TRAVEL STAR WARS, CYBERPUNK 2077, PLANET OF THE APE, free humans, MASS EFFECT, GOD OF WAR 4 GAME, FAIRY TAIL, MUSHOKU TENSEI, TOKYO GHOUL, DANMACHI, TENSURA, SUPERNATURAL, FALLOUT, GURREN LAGGAN, BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER, HARRY POTTER,

AUTHOR MADARA & ALICE COUPLE BECAUSE THEY BOTH HAVE EYE POWERS..ALICE EYES CAN SEE THE FUTURE, AND MADARA EYES CAN SEE THE PAST ...I LIKE ALICE, SHE IS A FUN AUTHOR

Author, why those MADARA visit the WARHAMMER universe after Twilight...MADARA LOVE WAR RIGHT or MARVEL join avengers or DC hero time or claymore anime universe, OR MASS EFFECT GAME madara fight machine gods with susano,,, PLANET OF THE APES free the humans from the apes help them, STAR WARS universe become a hunter or jedi..CMON THIS HAS POTENTIAL AUTHOR

This fanfic is a war crime madara should never be allowed near a high school in future and romance novel or sparkly vampires again Im requesting a posthumous restraining order on behalf of literature itself nonethless the fanfiction is good but i do not like that Uchiha. 0/10 — would rather be reincarnated as Danzo intern

this is really good!!! can't wait for another chapter

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Story doesn't make sense to me. he doesn't act human even tho he was. its just brain rot fighting and plot. arrogance instead of being humbled by his transformation. as a human hes garbage. He acts like a generic madara, but he wasn't madara. so hes acting like him. all the characters would think hes hilarious if they found out he was role playing. He's a God in a weak world and he became a villian. you gotta be truly broken to do that. Trash is trash.

My respects, this is really very good! It's written perfectly. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Surprisingly enough I became invested in the story. Give it a go, I say. I want to see how this pans out. SO I'm sure you will too. I just want to know if madara find a lady love eventually

Perfection. . .

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Pretty good but there is a huge problem. Madara was a loner and because of that, he was an endgame villain character. Main characters can't exist in a vacuum. This Madara has only woken up in a world met people did didnt interact with much then started killing people nonstop..... Is that all this character is some killing machine because a robot killing machine does not make a main character. Madara in Naruto wanted peace he thought strength and power were the way to get that and make the world bend the knee to him so he could lead them to peace. That's why he wanted the infinite tsukumi. Because all the fighting had cost his brother. He wanted a utopia free from suffering. This Madara seems like a battle-hungry emo.