Reborn as Anakin

need your stones.

I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists

the writing is horrible. difficult to understand. have used different names for iconic Starwars characters. couldn't get past half of 2nd chapter.

So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.

everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.

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Solid story, would recommend but I feel like I read this on fanfiction.com like 3 or 4 years ago. Could be the same author but just a thought.

very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.

bad review i got stroke trying to read this.

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bro some chapters are missing is it on purposs or what

Ya le saco el sistema, muy bien autor .