Reborn as Anakin

need your stones.

the writing is horrible. difficult to understand. have used different names for iconic Starwars characters. couldn't get past half of 2nd chapter.

I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists

So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.

everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.

Reveal Spoiler

Solid story, would recommend but I feel like I read this on fanfiction.com like 3 or 4 years ago. Could be the same author but just a thought.

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bad review i got stroke trying to read this.

very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.

Ya le saco el sistema, muy bien autor .

Lastima que deserción y todo iba tan bien, empezó con un desastre de escritura pero con una buena historia de fondo, despues se olvido de una heroina para que cuando por fin habíamos aceptado a la otra solo pasara eso sin ningun motivo asta en las peliculas hicieron un mejor trabajo dando pistas y un motivo logico por lo que se cambiaria la mentalidad del personaje para siempre y aqui nomas puf y lo que sigue enserio que lastima y que forma de arruinar una historia.

it was great, but "kingdom building" somehow ruined it for me. for me SW universe have only 3 good points - force, lightsabers and lore(which includes only previous two points). everything else in this universe is nothing special, including politics and technology. chapters are gigantic which is good. mc seems to have become op but was not truly tested in battle with any enemy, i mean lightsaber battle. mc is good with technology. ff lacks adversary. I would actually prefer him to continue playing in his own sandbox with force and lightsabers. new applications and smth like that. but AT is rly good. have a vision or had - here I'm not sure now. but no matter what i recommend to read it, because mc does not follow the canon and does his own thing. btw he is not sith. ))) gl